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Click here"Most of it's yours, you know. Deal with it." I say with amusement, and he reaches up to pull me down against him. I lie like that, spread on him, and listen to his heart as he it slows and he dozes off, clearly exhausted. My body aches pleasingly, and the feeling of his abused cock nestled between my thoroughly ravished lips delights me.
I try not to worry about what tomorrow will bring; the step we've just taken is enormous and could break both of us if we are ever found out.
But as I hold the love of my life against me, for the first time in a long, long time I feel at peace with the world and my place in it.
Em squeaked! (3 times!).
I am not a fan of incest stories, but I am a fan of your magnificent story telling and language skills.
I have read most of your other tales and finally got round to this one. As always I am awestruck by your ability.
God, I hope you wrote a hundred more incest stories. I haven’t been disappointed with a single one that I’ve read so far (minus anything mom/son or mom/daughter. I don’t read them)
As wonderful as are all your tales.
I love your magnificent use of our language.
You nom de plume is!a bit at a misnomer as far as I'm concerned I've read four of your stories now and they are all four hits. Ever thought of changing it to : hitsamillionwanda. All of 'em undervalued at five stars.
Oops. My mistake. Apologies to all; author and reader alike, i misquoted the line.
It should read
“…like the ticking of the metronome of the world; it is a sound that belongs to us only.”
You’re quite a wordsmith. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. All your stories, not just this one.
“…a ticking like the metronome of the world; it is a sound for us only.”
Great story. Beautifully written.
I hate many sex scenes I read, but the ones in this story were lovely. No one was calling the other a 'cum slut', or begging to be someone else's 'fuck toy'. There were emotions behind the act and the act itself served the story, rather than the reverse. Sometimes I am onto the second full page of overlly detailed fucking, and I ger bored and just stop reading. I never was anywhere near bored during this story. You have a gift. I am happy you are nurturing it.
In my seemingly never-ending quest for the Perfect Love Story, I came across this absolute gem. Now while it's not perfect, I do believe it's the closest I've found this far, which is saying a lot given how many I've read and how critical I am.
I liked the style of this. Those interspersed flashback moments showing windows into the past were really well done. I love stories that do that. I barfed internally at the reveal of her boyfriend cheating on her, but then again, I despite cheaters with the white-hot intensity of a thousand suns, so that's natural for me.
The way it was narrated was great. My heart was bleeding for poor Em. Desiring the one she knows who would make her happiest, but knowing (at least believing) he would never be hers. When she remarked about the cheating, "same story; different protagonist", I almost shed a tear. That's so damn tragic. I got really invested in her and hoped that she would get David in the end and finally find her true happiness.
When it was revealed David had the same feelings for her all this time, I was both happy and annoyed. The annoyance coming from the fact that they wasted all this time apart and with other people just because they were scared? Man that's just bullshit. There's a few years and lots of pain you won't get back. Damn it he should have told her and then waited for her, then gave themselves to each other as soon as she came of age. That would have been so sweet and beautiful. One day I'll find a story with that perfection in it; I shall not stop looking!
The way you described their lovemaking was above and beyond. It almost felt like I was there with them. Kudos on that one.
Overall, quite a beautiful story. Definitely will be reading this one again.