- First Time
- Snowfall
- Page 4
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Click here"Me, too, you."
He walked into the hall, and the door closed slowly and softly behind him.
As the light faded into darkness, Kevin switched on the outside lights so that he could continue to watch the snow fall. He put on the "Long Live Love" cd by Olivia Newton-John, and listened to "I Honestly Love You." He smiled with his memories. It had been eighteen years since he had last seen Evelyn. They had both traveled many miles always in different directions, she with her husband, he with his wife. But whenever the snow fell, she was first in his heart.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoAt about the same time, I was right there with you. No happily-ever-after for me, either, but I’ll never forget her, or cease to appreciate everything that she did for me. 5 stars.
thebug37almost 9 years agoThe first parts of this story weren't nearly as interesting as the closing comments of the loving couple. Nice story and hope you have more for us to read about this couple.
bawidgetcomsabout 11 years agoI like how descriptive you are. I think I'd enjoy reading your writing about... even making tuna salad!
This is beautifully written, and I can tell it's based on some real experience. That comes through. Thank you for sharing it.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoGood story. You are a good writer. If you're not getting paid, you ought to be.
Anonymousover 13 years agoYou made me cry.
That story was BEAUTIFUL.
Well done! Please write many more stories :)
xx
- Sv
