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Click hereI would have skipped my own funeral for that.
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All characters and events are fictional, and any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events, is strictly coincidental.
Interesting premise.
Nicely written.
Sex scenes seem to have needed to be slower paced. Needed more details. Needed more step-by-step. For example, when she jerked him off he suggested she do it with both hands as in a scene in the movie. To me, at least, it's have been more erotic if she started with one hand for a while while he enjoyed it and she enjoyed seeing/hearing his enjoyment. Then either he or she could have suggested trying with two hands as in the movie.
Four stars.
Characters were very believable and situation was accurate for that time period.
Another winner, Ken
That was beautiful. It was both incredibly sexy and romantic. As a member of the itty bitty titty committee, I feel a lot better about myself too. It was exceedingly well written, you should consider making this your day job. As an avid reader, I'd buy your books.
Many thanks to all those who have viewed, voted, favorited, and commented. When I first laid out the basic story, I had it ending when the women said goodnight. The phone call scene the next day was added much later, and I now realize it has teed up expectations for another chapter: the sunbathing on Sunday and a return to The Regent the following weekend. Rest assured, that chapter will be written eventually; but first, I need to complete several other stories before I tackle this sequel. Your patience will be rewarded.