Sorrel's Long Journey to Love Ch. 03

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Fletcher smiled, "That would be great."

Together the two people, Mary and Fletcher, fumbled around with the necklace. It was very attractive, much like a tennis bracelet but with numerous colored gems. The whole thing was scarcely three eighths of an inch wide and only about an eighth of an inch thick, but the metal that formed the basis of the necklace was misleading. It was hard but supple, something that could bend but certainly not break.

They got it around her neck, found the two ends with their corresponding eyelets. They placed the tiny piece of metal intended to go around her neck together. Fletcher took a pair of large pliers and squeezed the metal connector until it was completely compressed again the eyelets. Once the thing was pressed tight it was impossible to tell where the necklace came together.

All three people went to a mirror and looked at Sorrel's new necklace. It was a pretty piece of jewelry. Sorrel, in spite of her predicament, liked it. However, she had no idea why Fletcher had put it on her. Part of that information came next.

Fletcher said to Mary and Sorrel, "I have one more addition to the necklace." At the very front of the necklace there was a tiny ring, scarcely larger than a sixteenth of an inch in diameter. Fletcher pulled a small tag from the metal box. He held it up, "Read what it says"

Sorrel squinted at the tiny tag. She could discern two letters, "I see the initials, F.H."

Fletcher looked at her and at Mary, "When I put this small tag on the necklace you'll be wearing my initials. Anyone contemplating any funny business with you will be immediately reminded just whose you are."

Sorrel didn't' like it; it was like a dog collar. She said so, "What? This is my dog collar?"

Mary got it right away, and had figured out its true role. She ignored what Sorrel said, "It's a good idea Fletcher. Any time Sorrel leaves here everyone will see the necklace and immediately know who's responsible for her. No one will try to harm or abuse her because they'll know who they'll have to answer to. There won't be any of that funny stuff Florence was talking about either if they know whose initials are staring at them."

Sorrel was alert to the last comment, "What funny stuff?"

Mary answered, "I mean like trying to pierce your body parts. Don't worry. That won't happen."

Fletcher looked at both Mary and Sorrel, "Exactly. Then he looked directly at Sorrel, "You got it?"

Sorrel answered, "Yes. I understand."

Fletcher took the initialed tag and affixed it to the necklace, "There that should settle that."

Sorrel took the mirror and looked at the necklace again. It looked expensive. The tiny tag in no way compromised her sense of self. It was neither degrading nor complimentary, but she understood its protective nature. She evinced a slight smile, "The necklace is very attractive. I'll enjoy wearing it, even if I can't undo it." She looked at the ring. It had his initials as well.

Fletcher looked at her self-consciously. Then he looked at Mary. He gruffly gave Mary an order, "Why don't you take our girl to her real room, and help her find some real clothes. He looked at Sorrel, "I like what you have on, but it will unsuitable for what I want to do with you this afternoon."

Mary gave Fletcher a knowing wink. She turned to Sorrel, "Come with me."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Carvohi.... This Is So Great and Heart Pounding. I Just Can't Stop.

I need to know why and how things are only going to get worse from here. I read The Misogynist in a day and I loved everything about it, so this will be the second story I'm reading from you. I want you to know that I like what I'm reading by you, because I am about to rant! There is stuff I need to get off my chest about this chapter in particular.

I'm angry that Fletcher thought soldering on a ring on Sorrel, not having done it before, was the most logical thing to do in order to keep an eye on her. I'm so mutherfucking angry that this is supposed to turn into a romance eventually; I feel like it's supposed to be in erotic horror, not non-consent and reluctance, but erotic horror. I hate all of them (the characters: right now I hate Sorrel too). They just forgot that there was a pinky burned, because some prick thought it was a great idea. How is he appalled by body modification/disfigurement when he just soldered metal to her skin? Let me be wrong: The metal isn't permanently attached to her skin... it can be cut off. Please, let me be wrong. Someone explain.

To other readers and commenters: does anyone know of stories where the heroine doesn't forgive her abusers? I love this one, but I need a revenge plot bad lol. I haven't had much luck in my search.

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