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Click hereWe left the hotel and walked, companionably, across the courtyard and back to the station. I had only about five minutes to wait for the next train.
He said, "I keep my promises, baby. I'm sorry for what I had to do to you. I promise, you'll never see me again."
I stared at him for a moment. He looked haggard under the fluorescent lights. Maybe the experience had taken more out of him than I'd realized. Maybe he was haunted by the idea of years searching for another of his own kind. Either way, I stepped close to him and, of my free will, kissed his mouth.
It was our first and last kiss. His lips were surprisingly soft and gentle. I pulled out a pen and wrote my phone number on his hand.
"I don't understand who or what you are," I said, "or what really happened tonight. But ... call if you need me?"
He was moved; he looked down at his hand, and then up into my eyes. "I guess I don't understand, either," he said. "I don't understand how you can give me this, after what I've done."
Then my train pulled up with a whoosh. I stepped on board and watched as the doors closed between us. As I pulled away into the night, I wondered if I'd ever see him again.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 9 years agoThanks for the great story! Not just mindless fucking but actually an interesting story...part 2 would be nice
LoveMenLoveSexalmost 10 years agoWell-written and with sufficient but not endless description, this story was a pleasure to read. It seemed reminiscent of the recent trend of paranormal romances featuring legendary creatures but was, thankfully, without the purple prose that makes most of those utterly unreadable. Nice job.
DBRN84over 11 years agoI always come back to this story. The idea of mental orgasm is so hot, the visuals are so clear! Beautiful!
Lovetoreadtooabout 12 years agoI'm still acheing ( sp ) but it's true, the brain is the biggest sexual organ. Arousal begins with what you are thinking, the brain can make you feel and see things that are not really happening. I really enjoyed your story, I was not just some fly on the wall or a peeping tom. I was there, I was him,I was her; I felt everything!.
I would like to get to know more about the two of them. Brings new meaning to: "yeah, I was just fuckin with your head". shit ain't that the truth.
Thank you and please continue with your writeing skills.
Sebastian ( and yes I'm a girl )
Anonymousover 12 years agoI completely agree with everything the comment before mine stated. COMPLETELY!!!! It builds up and is so adorable at the end when she gives him her number...I could help but say "Awe!!!"
Please do continue writing!
Anonymousover 13 years agoI seriously love this story. I am a picky reader and most stories don't keep my attention. I would seriously love it if you could write a sequel. I wonder if they will meet again. Who is he by the way? I hope they do reunite and have some more sexual fun!!! Maybe even have a baby!!!
Anonymousover 14 years agoI can't stop reading it. It's beautifully written and you can see every second of it. It's classy and hot.
xBriarRosexalmost 15 years agoI've read and reread this story many times. Saved it on my computer even. Beautifully written. Even better than the every day pwp. The writing, the mystery, the sex! I wish this were a book and I could keep reading onto the next chapter to see what happens next! I'm curious about the non sexual aspect, who he is, how this will change her life.. and of course if they will meet again. Ah! The time that will be spent fantasising about this story. Brilliant. Thank you.
SapphicMojoover 17 years agoEven a rating of 5 doesn't do this story justice. I'd love to know where the hell this author has been hiding; I stumbled across another piece just prior to reading this and plan to read the 3rd and last submission after finishing comments on this. The writing is just that good! The emotive content is strong and realistic, the characters well-formed, and the storyline artfully executed. The author said, "You looked like liquid orgasm." Well, I say the author writes like one.
michael_op1over 17 years agoMan you are a powerful writer. This story reminded me a lot of the pusher episode on the X-files. It was a wonderful story that kept my attention from beginning to end. Thanks for sharing your talent with us
Anonymousover 17 years agoNot the usual slam bam. Several more stories would be great! Over successive stories, increase the tenderness, the caring, the joy. Then turn it into love and acceptance.. Perhaps end by having her become one of his kind... I think a lot of people would enjoy that.
Curvy66over 17 years agoGreat story. I can totally relate to the intense brain orgasm after reading this story. I shall be riding on trains and reading romance novels more often
Anonymousover 17 years agoGood story, and as noted above, unusual and very hot. Sure kept me reading. As one of the other posters has noted, the mystery of who, what the man was in unanswered. It might be better if it isn't.
Also like the reminiscence of the Hitchcock film, though of course, that was much darker.
Anonymousover 17 years agoGood beginning...I wonder what is he, and I DO wonder if she'll ever see him again...can we have some more?
