All Comments on 'Submission'

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Realdeal123Realdeal1235 months ago

Jesus! Author! How many times are you going to pull the same recycled friendzone-cuckold bullshit here? Are you trying to self-insert yourself into your stories here?!

titans2138titans21385 months ago

This is a very good story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I gave up after page 1. The MC is just a pathetic wimp. If the couple was into that type of relationship that's fine, but to follow like a wounded pet is disgusting. Not my thing.

Eze325Eze3255 months ago

Love it hope there's more

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very well written and the plot with all its details is very interesting! I very much like your story and I would like to read more of course. The psychodynamic's elements are subtle and also very deep. The feet and especially the hands worship scenes are fantastic! The body worship is also very erotic.

It would be interesting to see the relationship continuation between the couple without the other man (this is too much), but this is your story...

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great story! Eager to read how it develops! Would love to read about the cuck allowed to watch Sarah and Dave..

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Love it. More, please!

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