Sweet Gwendoline Ch. 13

I love you slavery and whipping stories. But I quit reading Gwendolyn when Mrs. Brie was shot. This is getting ridiculous.

Some conversations happen "off camera". Mrs. Brie would certainly tell Gwen that most people cannot be told about her non-human status, but I didn't cover that in this chapter. It might be referenced later in a flashback.

As for blood smears...there will be a lot of those...far too many to clean up before the police arrived. CSI will have a field day with that....especially when you consider the fact that Mrs. Brie's blood isn't human.....it's very similar to human, but with anomolies that the crime scene techs won't be able to make sense of.

Possibly this is a plot point that will become relevant in future chapters.

It seems like there should have been some discussion in the SUV about who it is OK to share this info with. Certainly not Julie, but what about Lyndsay?

Also, she left her blood all over the floor and there would be a blood smear where she got up and attacked again. CSI would love to do an episode on that crime scene.

Hi there, thanks again for another great chapter. At first i was a bit afraid of where this might go, but gradually i have the advantage of knowing you as a writer and being fully confident that our Gwen wouldn't remain with such a horrible man.

I have had some computer problems as well lately with files having gone up in thin air. I am not writing much at the time, but i know that the only solution is to start over again with the certainty that it is nearly impossible to write exactly the same story again, if directly from the heart.

That was different! Love it! Luscious second half with her the only one naked again... mmmmm