Swing Time Ch. 04

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At last Jake roused himself from his concubine's lap. "I suppose I should take you home."

"My parents really are out of town. Couldn't I stay?"

He cocked his head and looked at her sternly. "Are you telling me the truth?"

Hillary was not fazed. The act of giving herself to him had changed her more than physically. She met his eyes without flinching. "I've never lied to you."

Olaffsen nodded slowly. He thought of her virgin blood in his belly. "Just this one time, then."

He stood from the carpet and held out his hand to her. He showed her where the bathroom was, and the kitchen, in case she got hungry or thirsty.

They kissed at the bathroom door and he gently swatted her bum. "Take care of your needs. Towels are under the sink and you can use my robe."

Hillary luxuriated in the shower. It brought her glee to use his soap. There didn't appear to be a hair dryer, so she simply combed out her goldilocks and snuggled into the robe she found on the back of the door.

Her lover was already in bed, naked and falling asleep. Entirely delighted, she kissed him good night and spooned up against him, tucking her ass in his lap. He curved his arm around her and cupped her breast.

"I love you," she whispered.

Jake's eyes opened to face the dark. That could never be. He'd have to deal with it.

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My Funny Valentine by Richard Rodgers and Lorenz Hart.

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gemman1gemman1over 11 years ago
Fantastic as Usual

Job well done!. You handled that very well. I look forward to seeing how Jake handles his new "Love"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Fantastic

By far the hottest chapter so far. I loved it. It is pretty much a secret fantasy of mine from highschool to fuck my teacher. This is really a great story. Dana

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 16 years ago
Wow!

Another hot chapter. I didn't like the spanking and the sex between student and teacher but the sex was hot just the same. I'll keep reading.

NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
Okay

It was hard for me to rate this chapter. On the one hand, your writing is crisp, clear, and paints a vivid picture. The prose flows smoothly. <br><br>

On the other hand, the "first time" scene was, for me, rather unpalatable. *sigh* It's the teacher/student dynamic. I feel Jake crossed a line he should not. The fact that I liked his character in the earlier chapters is what adds to my disappointment in what he chooses to do in this one.<br><br>

However, I know this is a work of fiction, and this is also Literotica, so I figured I'd just split my vote, and came up with 75.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Different Author?

The first three chapters while not great literature were worth reading. This chapter does not flow with the previous chapters. It feels like it was written by a different author. The only people that would perceive this “first time” as sexy and erotic are inmates confined inside an institution. Why would a beautiful girl suddenly fall in love with a man old enough to be her grandfather? While Hillary just turned 18, she is still a student. I sincerely hope this “teacher” is fired and never allowed inside a school again. If I had to sum up this chapter in one word it would be creepy.

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