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Click here"No you're not," I said almost crying myself. I wrapped my arms around her from behind.
She spun around stunned. Her tears of sorrow turned to joy as she saw my face. She hugged me tight before kissing me hard. The small crowd that was around clapped with joy as we kissed.
"I thought you were gone," she whispered. "Why aren't you on the plane?"
"Gave my ticket to a lady who needed to get home to see her father before he is gone," I said. "No sense in making two people miserable today. I was going to take the next flight."
"No, don't go," she begged. "I'm here. I want to be with you. I don't care if it's not a normal life. It has to be better with you then without. Will you still take me back?"
"I don't know," I said. "How do you feel about living in an igloo?"
"I would live in a box behind a Denny's if we share it together," she sobbed.
"How about we just go to Florida and sort it out from there," I asked?
She held her hand out and waited for me to take it. I wrapped my fingers tightly around hers and turned to the ticket lady.
"I think we are going to need another ticket now."
"Already have it printing," she smiled.
Thanks for reading. Comments always welcome. Should I continue?
- COMMENTS
Hexdsword6about 5 years ago"Dam," the officer grumbled. "That's the third one this month. I fucking hate weddings."
I love this story, so far, as much as It’s the way you look at me. So if you keep writing, then I’ll keep reading!
goducks1almost 6 years agoglad you didn't. this one is 5 stars as well. I'm looking forward to chapter 4!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoAwesome! I was wondering if the sister knew when she gave him attitude about showing up, heh. No WAY those two fucked like rabbits that much without someone spying them out. Hell I wouldn't be surprised if some of the parents haven't figured it out by now ;). ....hope she remembers to call her sister to let her know she caught him! ;)
The story is easy to relate to, generally speaking, since I grew up with a hottie cousin that is about my age. Have some younger cousins that are now grown up and drop dead gorgeous and I could easily see myself falling for them at the drop of a hat, had the universe twisted a few different directions, heh.
Of course, my biggest regret is that for ALL the times my mom has been divorced and remarried, not one of those bastards had a hot daughter. I always wanted a hot step-sister out of one of the deals! Lol :)
Anonymousover 9 years agoi love the change of pace and the non-wedding. I was ready to find another story then it got good again. i love the way you describe the sex between them but it a little to often for me. And i am the One - eyed SEX MONSTER
Cudos
Anonymousover 9 years ago"Dam," the officer grumbled. "That's the third one this month. I fucking hate weddings."
Vrcruiser82over 9 years agoI know that word gets thrown around a lot but this story so far and especially the last 2 chapters were really good. Normally I wait til the end to comment, but I felt after this chapter it deserved a special note. Simply captivating. Can't wait to read the rest of the series.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoMY GOD YES PLEASE CONTINUE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ WETHER IT WAS COUSINS OR NOT GREAT STORY GREAT SEX SCENES AND I WAS CRYING TOWARDS THE END OF THIS ONE . PLEASE MORE!!!!!! :-)
lrogerbover 10 years agoYou had me shitting bullets until the very last few paragraphs. I kept thinking how can Jessica be so indecisive and how can Derek be so patient and forgiving. Thank god for Angela to save the day. You are one hell of a story teller and I like it that you don't use what I call $100 words that keeping me running to the dictionary to figure out what the author is trying to say and impress everyone that he/she is smart. Being smart is someone that can say or write things that everyone can understand not just the well educated and smart people. Thank you and I still have 2 more chapters to go and please don't make me cry.
Anonymousover 10 years agoYou shouldn't comment if you didn't read the story. He didn't fuck her at the airport. It was at the wedding site in a banquet hall or something then in the hotel room. Don't comment unless you read the whole story. I loved the emotion and would give it more than 5 if I could!
Anonymousover 10 years agoif he loved her he never would have left five years ago.
if he loved her he wouldn't have kept in touch with her because it would hurt to much.
if he loved her he never would have gone back when invited to the wedding.
if he loved her and went back he never would have fucked her and at the airport he would have turned and walked away when he saw her. if she is going to be so indecisive now and put him through so much shit what the hell is she going to be like after getting married? she wont change she will still cause constant grief and heartache, why would he put up with it. even love has its limits and she stretched those limits beyond breaking.
atheist_liberalalmost 11 years agoI don't care who knows this, but I was close to tears by the end end this chapter, so many great feels in this piece sir/ma'am. Thank you.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI am an avid reader and have read a good portion of the stories on this site as well as more books then I can count. I have to say that this story is hands down the BEST I have ever read, this site or otherwise. The characters are supremely built, masterfully interwoven and beautifully spoken. The small comments and descriptions coming from the characters make this story.
Also, while this may have been written as a 'erotic' tale, it is so much more then that. This is one of the only stories of this nature that has depth and feeling to it. You have created a wonderful base for future chapters or a perfect end to a great read. Thank you for all your hard work and please continue to write, you are one top 5 easily.
