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The tour took two hours and I was exhausted. The house was huge and more than I could have possibly imagined. It was more like a mansion than a fraternity house.
"I saved the best for last. Here is the master bedroom," he said while opening the door.
The room was huge! He wasn't lying about taking apart two rooms to make a larger room. This room was three times the size of the master bedroom at our house! I looked over at the bed and my jaw dropped. "How fucking big is that bed?" I asked.
"I had a bed and mattress custom made to be the size of two king-sized beds. That is not the best part though! Look above the bed!"
I looked at the ceiling above the bed and gasped. He had a large mirror placed on the ceiling so that it was reflecting the bed. "Your mother and I used to have a mirror on our ceiling. It made sex even more exciting!"
My brain was too exhausted to say anything. "I need a nap." I walked over to the humongous bed and pulled back the covers and climbed in. I scooted over to make room for my father and he slid in next to me.
"So do you like your graduation present?"
I smiled. "I fuckin' love it. Even if it is too much."
He kissed my forehead. "The present is still small when compared to my love for you."
I drifted asleep, feeling happy, comfortable, but most of all, loved.
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 12 years agoI would be very pleased if you wrote more chapters. I think about Nicolau and Trey daily. Their love is something that's unusual and their relationship must be the most heartbreaking and stunning I've ever read about. Please, let us know about his life in collage and keep all the characters and introduce us to new ones. This is a novel, not another sex story. You are such a good writer and you have to entertain us more. I have never been so euphoric about a story as I am about this one. I really feel for it. I feel for the characters. I know I sound desperate, but I'd be so glad if you continued this masterpiece!
Anonymousover 12 years agoi liked this story their needs to be more chapters on it and i would mention the dad a lot less. but other than having the dad in their too much the story was really good and like i said their should be more chapters.
quiesincaelisover 12 years agoYour story would be quite good if it was more believable. If you were ever truly in love you know that real love is exclusive. You see nobody else but the person you love - no matter how beautiful or perfect those other people are. Yes, it is possible to be In lust or infatuation with five people at once but not in love. In your story dad and mom are swingers who decide to be monogamous when Nick is born. Aafter his wife dies he lives in celibacy for ten years? I do not believe people change that much, specially as his dad strictly separates feelings from sexual attraction - as he says he had sex with women he didn't like. I can't see such a hyper sexed creature celibate for ten years. He wasn't faithful to his wife when she was alive, so Why would be faithful to her memory? I like your story very much but it's too unbelievable to truly touch my heart. It's too wishful thinking to be real. I hope you will continue writing to tell us who gets the prize or do they establish a harem in the end?
Anonymousover 12 years agoI truly wish that there will be more... I still can't help feeling jealous of Nicholae though... Being so loved...
131817over 12 years agoThat was awesome though I cant wait to see if you write a sex scene between nick and cody, or all for of the guys
Anonymousalmost 13 years agomake more chapters about their life in college and how it turns out right a nother series pretaning to this i love stories like this its mixed with romance friendship and hot fuckin' sex
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoYour stories are amazing. This story line is great! I love the relationship between Nicholae and Trey! I can't wait to see where you take them since they are going to be in college. I love the fact that the sex in the story is not overplayed and not the major focal point of the story.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoLook...idk wat to tell u to add or do with this series....I got so into it that wen I started reading I didn't put it down until I read every last sentence.....ur writing skills, imagination, sense of style and development is amazing...ur detailing like causes every word to send pictures to my mind and a gush of all the possible emotions the characters are feeling through my entire body.....hope to read more soon keep on writing
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoAll I can say is that are a writing GOD!!!!! And you need to continue writing this series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please have Nicolae and Cody fuck it would be so Hott!!!! KEEP writing!!!!!!
