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Click here"Yes," Isabelle whispered as if apologizing for something. "Neither of them seemed . . . well, really interested. They seemed like it was just something to check off on a list. Oh I don't know. . . Maybe it was me not knowing how. . . not knowing what . . . Isabelle broke down into tears.
"That's enough," Sylvie said. "It's okay Isabelle. I have no doubt you were not to blame in any way. Some men just don't have very strong libidos. Should you be the one for whom we search I can assure you that will not be a problem."
Before Isabelle could fathom that this encounter might be sexual and if so how she felt about it, especially the way this whole thing was seeming to be arranged and so public before she'd even met the man, Sylvie continued,
"If you can't gain a sense of her and what she is capable of then you do not belong on this council. Are we agreed then to proceed?" Sylvie's voice carried a note of command."
"Yes, let us vote," Isabelle heard Lucian say.
But even as they voted unanimously to proceed, all Isabelle could hear in her mind was a name.
Gabriel.
"The vote is concluded, the matter decided. We proceed."
The voice that would decree her chance at a future of which she had only dreamed seemed far off and she lost much of the end though he recognized enough to know what was said. Then the excitement, both physical and emotional overcame her and she drifted off to sleep no longer aware of her surroundings or those who remained within it.
- COMMENTS
EroticallyWickedalmost 8 years agoTwo request. 1. Finish what you start, or make chapters end. Don't leave readers hanging on a continuation. You ARE a proficient enough writer for readers to anticipate next. Possible to maybe publish, but make sure to write ending here.
2. Don't be a Christine Feeha, but unique in your story! She doesn't need her shoes filled and her path is obnoxiously same dominate patriartic male chauvinistic character, different name, same weak female because awesome sex.
You're doing good so far. Potential to be great!
HeraHestiaalmost 8 years agoAuthorI'm glad you liked the story and I really appreciate the comment. Since you said it has elements found in some of your favorite authors genres I would welcome a pm with any suggestions you have for the story direction in terms of things you might like to see or if you'd be willing to provide me with an idea of some of your favorite authors in this genre. Thanks again! I hope to have chapter 2 out soon where Isabellle will meet her tall, dark carpathian man!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agothis story sounds like it is going to be a very cool and exciting adventure. ithas so shown shades of my favorite authors genre. i hope you have a long and joyfull series planed...trs.
