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Click here"Yes, very, very, very bad," Devin said.
"I guess something that bad deserves punishment," I said.
"That's up to you," she replied. After a pause, she added, "Master."
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Thanks for taking the time to read my story. If you would like to leave a personal comment, you can respond through Literotica or you can always email me from your email at the contact on my profile. If you choose to vote, it helps me understand what you like or don't like. I debated about putting this in the BDSM category, but ultimately decided to go for Group Sex. Do you think I made the right choice? I am eager to hear from you. Was it too tame, too much—let me know? I am deeply grateful for editing and review by Perry. If there are mistakes or glitches, please know that the fault is with me, not Perry and not the stars.
- COMMENTS
Dadiesdreams2 months agoDefinitely very hot story, Had me drooling, waiting for him to fuck Devin and the two girls to fuck.
Anonymous10 months agoBeautifully described journey into mild domination and the liberation of Devin.
Any chance of a sequel?
Anonymousover 1 year agoThis definitely went to a darker place than most stories I read. But it was also very erotic. I really enjoyed the climax denial.
That being said, when the sex began, it could have been much more descriptive. And Devin never did get her ass fucked.
Overall I did enjoy it though, and would have liked more!
As I still can't log in, (are you reading this literotica.com?!) I have to sign this,
Yarnspinnerr ;->
Anonymousover 1 year agoI absolutely loved the final word of the story, total icing on a gorgeous cake.
Mercury125over 3 years agoA great story with well defined characters and really hot sexual tension. I normally am turned off by any story that strays into the realm of BDSM, but this story just pulled me into a whole new way of thinking. For the very 1st time, I found myself getting turned on by the erotic nature of light BDSM play. Thank you for writing such a captivating story that allowed me to discover this fact.
Redtrollalmost 4 years agoI never thought I was into BDSM because I didn't understand all it encompasses. I've recently been picking up on a little bit of Dom/sub stuff as well as brats. I don't like punishment types of things. Your story has me at a crossroads. None of it was too far for me and I could picture myself as the boyfriend (Dom) and as a male version of the friend(sub) with a FemDom. I'm still trying to figure it all out but this was truly amazing. Thank you.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoOrie,
This is one of your best; images are clear, personalities are approachable and well developed, and it is a compelling story. Would make a great NC-17 screenplay.
Thanks, I really enjoyed it.
RiverViewGuy
