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Click here"Okay, then, you will have driving privileges, but you have to ask permission to use the car, in case I need to run errands. I will make sure you have everything you need and want, providing you act like a gentleman and follow my rules. Is there anything you want to add to the rules?"
"No, Daddy, I'm okay with your rules," Ant said, "But there is something I need to tell you."
"And what's that?" I asked, draping an arm around him, pulling him close to my side.
"It wasn't an accident you found me in the alley this morning. I've been hanging out there for about a week, trying to get your attention."
"I don't understand," I admitted, feeling like I might have been set up, or something even more nefarious.
"I was actually hoping to run into Mathew. I didn't know he was dead."
"Why were you looking for Mathew?" Now I was just confused.
"Because Mathew was my father."
You have GOT to take this further! This is a beautiful story and needs to go further! It is a great cliffhanger to end on but please think on it! Thank you
They have to be more of the story. Where do we go from here. We need more of the story. Because I have a feeling, that Ant Grows up to be a fine gay man but has to break Daddy heart so he can grow on his own. Or daddy has to tell him to go he loves him enough to send him on his way ..
Didn't expect that ending which was great. However, the story moved to fast and I would suggest you develop the characters a bit more. I enjoyed it.
Okay you cannot leave this story with that ending!!! How did Ant find out? Did Callum know that Mathew was bi? There are too many questions that need answers here.
Can’t wait for a three part series. So much raw material at the ready. I
I got a private feed back (much appreciated, BTW!), but it was from an anonymous user, so I couldn't reply. (I hate that!) To answer the question, the father that kicked Ant out wasn't Mathew. Mathew knew nothing about having a son. I've decided to rewrite this story in third person, so I can change perspectives, and I'll take my time with revealing the story (and change a few things) because it seems to be so confusing to so many. Guess I'll just chalk this one up to a failed attempt, and will seek redemption with a new attempt. Thanks for all the feedback, though. It's helpful.
I like the story, I agree with others, it moved a little fast, but please continue, would like to hear what happens next. Do they stay together or does finding out that he is his late boyfriends son spoil everything?