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Click here"Are... are you asking me to marry you?" Betty asked quickly.
"Well, yes I am in a round about way," Frank said with a big grin.
Betty just sat there with her mouth wide open as she stared at the big man sitting on the side of the bed in disbelief.
"I know we don't know each other very well, but I have a feeling we would be great together."
Betty closed her mouth and hurriedly downed the rest of the water. She handed Frank the glass. "Put that on the nightstand," she said softly.
When he did and turned back toward her, Betty was grinning from ear to ear. "Hell yes I'll marry you but the courthouse won't be open until tomorrow morning, so...."
Frank grinned back at her and then whispered, "So...."
Betty laughed as she flung herself against him. "We still have all day to practice for the honeymoon."
"I knew it, you're just like all the rest, after my body and nothing more," Frank said in mock protest.
Betty grinned and shook her head. "Nope, I'm after the whole thing, mind, body, and spirit. It's all or nothing with me."
Frank laughed as he pushed her down onto her back and laid down on top of her. "You got it baby," he whispered and then kissed her long and hard.
*****
The wedding took place the following weekend at the same church as the failed one. There were only a few friends and family there and no bride's maids or groomsmen. Betty wasn't taking any chances this time.
Just as someone mentioned earlier : The story „leaves me wanting more of an ending. All the stories feel like 1/2 a story; lots of details and then. . . we're done. ;-{ Just too bad.“
So it *could* have been a really excellent story, but is - unfortunately - just a *good* one !
4/5 stars!
If it’s your goal to ‘always leave them wanting more,” then you’ve succeeded, yet again.
Seriously hot story.
Great story. Great writing. Hot! Hot! Hot!
Unfortunately, ALL of this author's stories leave me wanting more of an ending. All the stories feel like 1/2 a story; lots of details and then. . . we're done. ;-{ Just too bad. I'm sure some writer's could make a "career" just writing the next chapter for each story. In any event, I can't mark down such a fine story just because I'm dissatisfied with where the author ends the story.
mfj
I would love to read more about this couple and their toy drawer, and of course Brad and Karen receiving their just desserts.
Great story but needed a better end with slut Karen and Brad meeting their comeuppanxe
Nicely done but not enough substance. Could have followed up with another page or two 4*s.
Very good story, probably my favorite of TXRAD's. Sure, it's improbable, but that's what makes it so much more interesting. Thanks, TxRad.
It is crazy to go from dumped at the alter to lets get married to someone else in like 2 days but I think this story should continue. I want to see the ex groom and brides maid get their when they get back. How funny is it gonna be when he goes to go to work after the "honeymoon" and goes into the bosses office and theirs his ex married to his boss and he gets fired.