The Fundraiser

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Kelly is selling candy door-to-door.
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capconman
capconman
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Kelly was going door to door selling candy for her school. She just had to beat that brown-noser Prudence. Prudence won every contest and got every honor, but Kelly knew she could beat her.

She was only four streets away from her house, knocking at every door, and she had already raised over $50, so she felt pretty optimistic. She came up on the next house and rang the doorbell. A man in boxer shorts and a white t-shirt answered the door. "What do you want?" he asked abruptly.

"I'm selling candy for Gerald Ford High School. Would you like to buy a chocolate bar? They're only one dollar!" She beamed as she announced.

He looked down at the chocolate, then looked back up at her, then scanned her body. The 18-year-old was wearing a short skirt and tank top because of the warm weather. She could feel his eyes going over her C-cup breasts and down beyond.

"I got a better idea." He grabbed her by the neck, pulled her inside quickly and shut the door behind her. He slammed her against the wall inside and kissed her hard on the lips. She squealed and tried to break free, but he was just too strong. Then he picked her up around the waist, holding her hands to her sides, and carried her into the bedroom. She kicked her legs the whole way.

She was thrown onto the bed, hitting her head on the headboard. Her blond hair was now all disheveled. He used a key to lock the bedroom door, then he put the key in his dresser. She was his now.

As much as she tried to resist, he stripped her shirt from her body. The black bra underneath was seized and ripped until it came off with no problems. He used his own weight to pin her down as he fondled her breasts. She cried but her nipples still became hard from his rough caresses. He slipped one hand down underneath her skirt and felt it cupping at her pussy, which was starting to get wet against her will. He was able to tug her black panties down to her ankles. Her skirt was no help against the intruder. She could feel his organ getting harder inside his shorts, and was then distracted by a large finger entering her private place. The tears streamed down her face.

Kelly's hymen pushed back against the finger like a wall, but she knew that wall would come down soon. As she became more and more wet, he finally slipped out of his drawers and aimed it at her entrance. He whispered in her ear, "You belong to me," and suddenly thrust inside, taking her virginity in one powerful stroke.

He fucked her until he came inside her, which felt like an eternity. When he finished he got off of her and stood. She lay on the bed, sobbing. He took her panties from her and put inside his dresser, removing the key.

He unlocked the door, and she sat up. He tossed some money at her, and told her, "You're not a bad fuck, girl. I wouldn't mind seeing you again." She took the money, slipped her tank top back on over her free breasts, and walked out of the house, her tender pussy still dripping with both his and her juices.

She waited until she was home before she looked at the money she still had in her hand. A thousand dollars! Maybe it wasn't so bad...

capconman
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Right. And not right

Author, you were correct about this story sucking. I checked out several of your other stories that you were more proud of. Ya know what -- you shouldn't be.

Don't quit your day job.

[Ya notice how some little pervs want you to make your story fit thier own little masturbatory fantasy? "Put her in a short black skirt." "Get her pregnant." Sickos

capconmancapconmanabout 19 years agoAuthor
Oops

This is the author of the story. I can see now that this story clearly sucked (and not in a good way). If I could take it down to fix it, I would, but the site won't let me. I hope anyone who was disappointed in this story will check out my other works; don't judge me until you've read something better of mine, like "Dr. Pards." Thanks for your feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
the main issues are story length and description

I honestly think you should rewrite the story and try again. You have an erotic premise, but tell me more about the man and the girl....what they look like, who he is and how is she feeling as she panics....make him someone who decides to tease and tantalize her with the fear of losing her virginity, all the while making her feel the sexual anticipation. you rushed it so fast that the story is over before it begins.

An old story that may help you in this category is The Taking and Making of Melanie. The older man, but not too old, and younger virgin female, reluctantly losing her viginity is an highly charged erotic theme. You could do so much more with this set up...TRY AGAIN! You just need to repaint this picture and not go so fast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Fuck you feminists

IF YOU DON'T LIKE STORIES ABOUT RAPE, DON'T FUCKING READ THEM. I wonder if people are sad enough to leave little anti-rape comments on every non-consentual story on literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Too short

You've got a great story here that is just way too short. Build it up before you go to the final act. And make it a little more real with the girl - a virgin, freshly raped, is not about to change her entire worldview and suddenly become a slut. A little more plot and a little more reality and you'll have a classic with this story.

Rewrite it and repost it.

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