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Click herePoor Toby. She hoped that he was okay. She grieved at the thought of not getting to see him mature. She knew he would grow up to be a fine young man. As would have John... the cute youngster...
The thumping slowed, getting softer in her ears.
The world greyed. Jake. Her thoughts were of him as she slipped into unconsciousness.
- COMMENTS
Opensesame54321over 7 years agoAuthorYes, there is a Chapter 7. I've been making final corrections to it and hope to submit it either today or tomorrow. Then it will go in the queue and usually takes several days before it is accepted or rejected. I will give you a heads up if it is rejected and I have to do more revisions.
I don't plan on leaving you with an unfinished story. I'm glad that you want more. Thanks to everyone for the positive comments. And those of you who point out the things that bother you about my writing - I am taking all of that in consideration. You all help my work improve.
Anonymousover 7 years agoYoure a good writer and the story is well written, but god damn Samantha is such a weak little bitch. Even if she did attempt to kill Patch, she felt guilty. Which she shouldn't have. Hopefully she develops into a truly strong noble woman. Not some petty excuse bitch like this.
Anonymousover 7 years agoI hate cliffhanger! but adore this story keep it up.
