All Comments on 'The Hell in Your Eyes Ch. 10'

I wouldn't mind if this is the ending, Sam deserves better. Jack can spend the rest of his miserable life alone.

I agree to the comment before me. This was hot but Sam deserves better and Jack deserves to suffer. At this point of the story, this is an appropriate ending.

Anyone interesting in trying to write their own interpretation of a conclusion to this story?

What the hell!!! Its been 8 years and nothing!?!? Fuck!

Oh no!!! Please write more! I just want to know how it ends!! 😭😭😭

Why! Why why why do I always fall in love with stories that aren’t finished. Ahhhh I need to know what happens 🤣🤣🤣

I STAYED UP ALL NIGHT READING AND THIS-

Ima cry

Ngl, I agree with the ones saying this is an OK ending if it was a closure type of thing.

Jack lowkey abusive and the plot was well put together (Esp when her dad got a pay raise bc Jack is his effin boss!) But I kinda think Sam x Jane or the science guy woulda been cute, esp if Jane/Science guy learned about Jack and went to great lengths to protect her and possibly Sam getting a trauma based kink since this is Literotica.

Idk what the rules say but 100% would love to see someone (while giving credit to OP) rewrite the entire thing, ending included.

Not every story has a nice happy ending, people need to realise this.

Hoping for some closure.

I need more chapters we need to see how it goes

Keeping the candles lit. Hope the author is okay.

why are good stories always left incomplete? pls complete it i need a conclusion to it, its just too good

Still keeping the candle lit.

I’ve come back to this website since 2016 just to check for new chapter. 6/7 years! I get my hopes up every time. I wonder when i’ll stop. :(

came back to check only to b disappointed again :( pls complete the series its been long enough

Walmart had a sale on candles. So I'm back, with matches and lighters to spare.

Why does this story remain unfinished? Did the author die?

@anonymous Who knows? At this point... It's either account abandonment, or something far more unfortunate has happened. Still, keeping the candle lit. Of all the authors and stories to keep an eye on, I chose this one and their story, seeming unfinished, and hoping for some kind of resolution. However, I'd settle for some sign of life from the author...

Too bad I was looking forward to the downfall of Jack watching him spin out of control get arrested/killed/commit suicide.

To person below he wasnt lowkey abusive - he was abusive in every single way imaginable. He never experienced any character growth what soever. Even when he said he wanted to be good it was just a facade to control her and he would just rape her again the second she refused.

Was looking forward to some " I spit on your grave " style revenge oh well

Please continue this😭

Found some candles! Someone's gotta keep hope alive.

Nooooo 😭 This story is too good to be left unfinished!! PLEASE finish it!

Cleaning up some candle wax...

I have come back every year since first reading this story in 2011 to see if it's finished. One of my absolute favorite erotic stories

Keeping hope alive!

So obsessed I love how this author writes, I’m like you guys I keep coming back ….

Same, Anon. Hoping our dear author is well and aware of the devotion of a few of her readers.

I am completely obsessed with this story, and Jack!