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Click hereNico looked at him with a baffled expression, "I'm not sure how that translates into anatomy and biology. Maybe this is the excuse you need to get your shot with her. Claim it's for science."
Kyle chuckled, "I'll cross that bridge when I come to it. Right now, I need to fix my body. You're my best bet to do that."
Dino set down a large plate of green tinged pasta covered in a white sauce, "The Doc's already given me the details of your special diet. Once you get back to normal, we can change it to suit what you want to do with yourself."
"Training again?" Kyle asked dryly.
"No, like I said. Whatever you want to do with yourself. You will be doing something, because you aren't a freeloader. Right?" Dino poked a sauce covered spoon threateningly in his direction.
"Of course I'll help out. What exactly needs to be done around here anyway? Better yet, where is here?"
Nico smiled, "All in good time, Kyle. Finish your lunch and we can show you around if you feel up to it. "
Kyle nodded, "Sounds good to me."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoIf it’d known it was a work in progress I would have started a different series
EasyReader44over 5 years agoLove your stories, keep up with both of them, only very few spelling errors etc, but that dont take anything away from the stories you write. They are excellent. Thank you.
Anonymousover 5 years agoYou have a great way of telling a story!
Keep on (and get some more help with spellchecking ;-)
Grizzly_Fictionover 6 years agoAuthorNormally I add a page break when the chapter splits. Thanks for letting me know! I'll add a note for the mods to make sure it stays in.
noodlyarmsover 6 years agoLoving the story so far and I am exited to see where it leads. For future chapters, maybe consider some kind of visual que to indicate a change in perspective. Something like a line across the page when you switch from Kara's to Kyle's perspective would make those transitions a little cleaner and easier to follow, especially if you add more character perspectives in the future.
Keep up the good work!
