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Click here"911, what's your emergency?" A professional voice answered crisply.
"Yes," Lily said, smiling. "A man is in my house. I think he's dead." Her tongue explored her sharp teeth behind pure black lips. Her vertical eyes widened slightly in amusement. She pressed her finger down on her clit and wriggled her hips in delight. "Please. I'm scared."
As the operator asked for information, Lily pleasured herself. Slowly and carefully, she coaxed her nerve endings into full attention. Eddie's soul wept as Lily finished the phone call and hung up. She allowed herself two fingers into the greedy hot wetness between her thighs and smiled when she heard sirens in the distance.
"Don't worry, Eddie," Lily cooed. "You won't be alone long."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoPlease keep writing this story, it's been a while since I've read something as original as this!
sopharoonesover 10 years agolike, seriously, im more feeling the horror than eroticism but not in bad way just very different to wat im used to. Lilys transformation full on
Lycandopeover 10 years agoAuthorI am a bit nervous about this one. After I published it I totally wanted to add more to it. I feel like I didn't do a smooth job with the transition of her mentality. Blah. But, it's okay? I haven't read any succubus stories before so I don't know what's "normal"
Hope you try Winter Coat and like it! I also have a sci-fi piece waiting on approval and I think it turned out really well :)
LiterKnightover 10 years agoIt's good to have you back, Lycandope; not quite where I was expecting the story to go, but still very good. I can't wait to see where it goes next time. Ignore the first comment, someone is being an idiot whilst abusing their anonymity or not understanding the implications of 'erotic horror.' Good work. Keep it up.
Lycandopeover 10 years agoAuthorWell, thank god. I was starting to worry that I'd done something really, really wrong. And, thank you for the compliments. Apologies for the length of time between chapters.
Anonymousover 10 years agoAn excellent break from the usual succubus stories that read like teenage wet dreams. Keep it up.
Anonymousover 10 years agoon the standard succubus tale. I'm not normally a reader of the erotic horror category, but I'm enjoying your story quite a bit. I was at first confused by the Michael/Lily shift, and I still feel it could be improved, but I will say that as Lily's confusion has fled, so has mine; so perhaps it was somewhat intentional.
Evidently the other commenter either missed the category or doesn't understand the concept (or at least the possibilities) of Erotic Horror. I hope his ignorant insult doesn't dissuade you from continuing this story. Thanks for writing!
Anonymousover 10 years agoSick,horrible,disgusting story! The author of this foul rancid crapula should be castrated!
