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Click hereHe didn't remember going back to his room. He didn't remember pulling on a clean pair of boxer briefs and crawling into bed. He did however, remember the sight of Gesabel's creamy thighs and butt as she shimmied her boy shorts and jeans down her legs so she could go to the bathroom. He rolled onto his side with a groan and curled into a ball. That nauseating guilty feeling had returned. His eyes slid closed as he willed himself to sleep, trying desperately to ignore the throbbing between his legs.
This wasn't the other part of the same story. Different story 2nd part. Please get it together. I would like to know what happens with Angie and Sammie and her brother
I do wish you would revisit this story line and continue until the finish. I happen to
like stories that build up and not just a "quickie" type where there is no thought
whatsoever. I know everyone has an opinion, but you write the way you feel it and
there will be plenty of people to read your stories.
I thought that you have a nice start on something that could go on for awhile and I like those kind of stories. If I were you I wouldn't be very concerned about the negative comments as those folks didn't have the balls to login and let you know who they are and what they thought (like they just do it in the dark). You are doing fine, keep working on it. It will take some time to hone your skills. Rome wasn't built in a day.
What happen to the ending you should have made a better ending because this one really suck