by Lien_Geller
I think it speaks to your confidence as a writer that you didn't break this up into smaller segments as is so often done by others. This can weed out low scores from any who did not like a story, thus getting a skewed higher score from those who like it and continue reading.
You also don't seem to care about how many "hot" stories you have on your list. This could have easily been broken down into 10 or more chapters by itself. You appear to be all about the writing.
The story was so well written, I found myself skipping many of the sex scenes to get to the next part of the plot. Those I did read were very well written, but the story as a whole was too interesting to worry too much about who Greg was boinking and who was next in line.
Looking forward to Ch. 4
Started this journey for the horniness, stayed for the plot (and the horniness). Very well done!
What a great journey. 5+****** I hope the author has some new ideas and offers new work. I wouldn't hesitate to dive in. One of the best reads on LIt!
This remains the best story on Literotica. That was true in 2017. Remains true today
Wow, chapter 5 was amazing. I'm not ashamed to admit to some tears dropping at the loss of some people near the end. Is there any plans for a chapter 6?
I read this again every couple of years because every aspect of it is of astounding quality. I’ve not totally given up on there being a chapter 6, but even if there isn’t, I’m sure I’ll remember this story for decades to come.
This is not an open ending, in my opinion, but an unfinished story. Unfortunately, for some reason, the author did not finish it. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading what was written, and I didn't even have an unpleasant aftertaste, as happens in the case of ragged plots. Therefore, thanks to the author and 5 stars for his work.
Like everybody else, we can but pray that Lien_Geller is in good health and otherwise occupied.
Also, that they will eventually turn their attention to writing another few chapters.
As for what has already been presented, typo's and other issues aside, it's probably one of the best stories told here in Literotica.
OMG! What a place to end the series! This was posted on 06/23/17 so I think we can assume, unfortunately, that this series is now abandoned (even if the Series Info says it's still active). If I'm wrong, please correct me, Lien_Geller! I'd love to see more of this series!
5 stars for every part
Thanks
Dear author,
This amazing story is now 6 years old, so I don’t think you will continue it. However it is a great story. Definitely the best of its genre, probably the best overall.
So thank you for your story.
Awesome!!!! I havent seen any more, is the rest on a different site?? Please dont say that its over, id love to see more!!
Amongst the best there is on this site - a gold standard for other authors to aspire to.
Last contact July 18, 2022
Its a great first book and this was the last item you posted in 2017. Five years should have given a good start on book 2?
Please continue, I look forward to reading book 2.
Truly a well told story -- with a tremendous amount of incredible sex. I hope you are well, friend. Your accomplishment here is impressive. If you feel like offering more, please know that there are many grateful readers who will devour your works.
This is an incredible story. When I saw this last chapter was 60 pages. I love reading long epics. I also wish it would be added to.
Holy crap what an amazing conclusion. I hope one day to read more of these characters and worlds, so many unanswered questions!
What an epic story. It is interesting, passionate and fun. Also very well told. I look forward to their travels!
Thank you for this story, left me hungry for more and to discover how the tale unfolds. Thoroughly enjoyed it
Wow! I don't have words that will come together that make much sense. The story is phenomenal, the characters are real enough to bring tears and laughter as they confront their challenges, and I can't wait to see what glorious adventures are in their future. Thank you for a well-crafted tale....
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Well done. 👍 👍, 5 🌟s and all the 👏s I can provide.
Bro it’s been 7 years. Maybe the plagiarizer should continue the story. 🤣🤣
A great story! I wish another author would pick up this world and write follow up stories. I enjoyed very much and would buy the books if published.
Thank you Lien Geller!
I liked the story and the characters even better than the smut - which is excellent as well.
I would buy all subsequent books if they were self published on kindle unlimited. How many readers here would buy them? Maybe with enough interest we'd finally be able to learn how they meet the emperor, how they handle the antagonistic lord and repair human orc alliance, how they join the war in the north and fight the demons. Not to mention the ring power, the restored elf Valise, magic armour, business empire etc.
I guess a happily ever after is also possible for his 4 ladies (maybe plus princess?), but this series is fantastic and even if published as is it would definitely be highly rated. You might fade to black most smut and you still have a great fantasy series!
Either way, thanks and best wishes!
Oh my god, the best story I've read on here. I'd love more of the adventures of Greg, Jeanette, Algara and the rest of the clan.