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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Loved it , would like to hear more from the five of them

SlonEazySlonEazyover 4 years ago

Like your approach, SlonEazy. :-)

I'm new here but not to sex and/or fantasy. I'm not a female but really like the way you write. Enjoyed this story.

joder181joder181about 7 years ago
My comments

Wow an incredible story loved it. Thank you

100appreciative100appreciativeover 8 years ago
Holy Hannah!!!

One of the cleverest plots ever!

A hot fantesy about a guy and two women WITH WIFE'S APPROVAL.

A very benevolent and caring development.

Great to add Frannie into the mix.

Excellent device to have the wife turn on to other women.

Very hot denoument with everyone catching fire.

Please add a fifth section in which the connections continue.

jwswinglejwswingleabout 11 years ago
Comments are spot on! Well written and hughly erotic!

Just add his taste on kisses between Erin and Val, and inside Fran and Erin and Val, creampie tasting, completely missed that opportunity! SO many opportunities from the girl couple kissing, to Fran tasting him in her sixty nine, to the wife sucking her finders off while fingering Erin, to Val and Erin sharing a kiss after he comes from their blowjob....But great story anyway, and keep 'em coming!

playman64playman64about 11 years ago
Very erotic

I really enjoyed reading the build up into the climax of the story. very good is very nice to stroke to.

cpetecpeteabout 11 years ago
Extremely well written

Loved the interplay between the ladies, your writing of the conversation was smooth and really flowed naturally.

Yes it is every males fantasy to have two women at once...unfortuneately it is usually two women too many!

CuriousaboutloveCuriousaboutloveabout 11 years ago
Five star, plus

I adored this. Both her reservation about being with a girl and Erin's reservation about being with a guy washed away by the sensuality. Beautifully written and I loved that the exploration was inside loving relationships.

UnfetteredMaleUnfetteredMaleabout 11 years ago
Great work

Great buildup, great pace, erotic action..really outstanding and hot!

ShadowlandsShadowlandsabout 11 years ago
Fantasy fantastique...

Excellent build up. I do like a bit of anticipation. Racks up the tension. Other contributors have got it right. Something for everyone... and just how sex should be lol. Nothing too serious, adult fun, and no regrets or recriminations. Wouldn't it be a wonderful world if this was considered normal behaviour. Doubt I'll live long enough to see that!!!

Well done Mandymomma. I'm a fan.

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