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Suzie folder in hand, Suzie taking it all in, Suzie taking a thousand photographs with one blink. There was Neil collapsing against the wall and before him, was ever so cutesy Pixie licking the tip of his ejaculating cock, her ridiculous breasts sprinkled with his cum.
Suzie looked at her and looked at him and then looked back at her.
Neil hid his face and tried not to think of anything but the incredible bliss that had just dissipated around him.
Pixie looked up at Suzie, arched her back, pushed out her tits, smiled and knew, just knew.... She'd be working Saturday.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoI already know the spoiler.
Nice start. Can't wait to read more especially how Suze is going to react. Such a cliffhanger.
Mymantoy999over 7 years agowon't talk about the things (rather rudely I might add), already pointed out. This is your first ever story so you have something to build on. Looking forward to seeing how the story develops, especially between Suzie and Pixie.
Anonymousover 7 years agoLearning basic punctutation and grammar (the kind I learned by 5th grade) would go a long way. You need to use quotation marks around dialogue. I can't believe you need to be told that.
