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Click here"There it is!" Lisa was excited. Her roommate wasn't just a naughty girl who was a stripper, she was a glamorous woman of mystery with police on her trail. Lisa loved the Forensic Files and the CSI shows. The joy of it was all over her face.
Suddenly, everyone was happy.
"Come on in!"
"Yes! Come in, Halili," echoed Lisa, "there's cabernet."
I love the subtle way one is drawn into caring about these marginal figures on the American landscape.
The balance between prose and dialogue is near pitch-perfect. You propel the story along in both cases. It's engaging, erotic when it needs to be, but also with a pop novelists sense of plot and story -- where the sex is only a distraction and not the thrust.
This seems very polished. You have great skill as a writer.