The Shoot

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"Wait," she panted.

Sam popped out of her as she pulled herself away from him. I was just a little confused until she stood, turned around and pushed him to the floor. Putting her legs over him and straddling his large, wet cock, she climbed on him and rode him. She rode him fast and hard, all the while ignoring me and my needs. They both moaned and clawed at each others bodies, moving as one. My ears and eyes were in shock as I watched my wife aggressively fuck the shit out of another man four feet from me. His wet and pink pussy lips climbed u and down his shaft, engulfing him with a lustful hunger. She let her breast fall into his moth, and he sucked hard on her nipple as she groaned. Her hips moved with a beautiful rhythm, up and down, up and down, with just a slight wiggle on the down stroke. She did moved on him I never recognized, and he was completely lost in her lust as she took her pleasure from him. And as Sam start to groan deeper and louder, Jenny reached down with her mouth and did the one thing I told her NOT to do, the one sacred thing I thought was only for us and our marriage...she kissed him and took his tongue in her mouth. With his tongue inside her mouth and his cock deep in her unprotected pussy, he burst inside her and moaned into her open mouth. At the very same moment, she came on top of him, moaning "Oh, my God. My pussy is so tight for you. Give it to me. Cum for me, baby, right inside me." Her pussy contracted on his cock...milking it and pulling every drop of lust out of his body. He came for what seemed like 5 minutes, pumping into her bare pussy.

After a final push of bodies into each other, their movements slowed to the occasional twitch and a final stop. When completely finished, she kissed him softly on the mouth and crawled down his body. When he slipped out of her, a thick gob of his semen dripped out of her pussy and unto his thigh, followed by a stream of their mixed juices coming out of her gaping hole. This was my vision as she placed her mouth around his cock to clean her juices off. My wife had one goal in mind, and I had no part in this. My wife had one goal, and I with no part in it: to get him ready for Round Two, because she already wanted his thick cock inside her again ...

By Willsam

Edited by Ivan Ublyudok

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

whore and wimp ,hope you love the pictures.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Sounds like a divorce is a done deal

Maybe you should write part 2 where the couple divorce. I bet he never makes the same mistake again. Now I know he's hurt, and fuming. Get the fucking pictures dude. Make sure she never gets the kids, etc.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Maybe

Maybe you, and the rest of us will get lucky and someone will shoot you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wet panties

My wife loved the fucking bits. She wants to do the same , First photographed then

stripped and fucked hard and cummed inside her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I liked it.

Enjoyable story, Hope you share more. Could use some editing as there were several spelling and grammatical errors.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Why the *fuck* do people post comments insulting femdom & slut wife stories which basically translate to "i'm not into this".

If you don't like the premise then go to another story, retards.

I liked this over all. It was a simple set up nicely executed (well on the first page).

How a previous commenter couldn't understand who was doing what when there was only 3 people I do not understand.

The grammar and spelling issues are definitely present with the following one of the worst examples:

"My ears and eyes were in shock as I watched my wife aggressively fuck the shit out of another man four feet from me. His wet and pink pussy lips climbed u and down his shaft, engulfing him with a lustful hunger. She let her breast fall into his moth, and he sucked hard on her nipple as she groaned."

How are ears in shock? Fucking the shit out of - always sounds like you've made someone poo themselves. His wet pussy? Breast into moth = Squished moth.

Compared to the start, the attention paid to both content and execution by the end is terrible. Thankfully I'd orgasmed over the story before I got to that!

The final paragraphs are too long and need to be broken up, and they seem to have been typed one handed with the author's attention elsewhere ;)

I'm utterly, utterly shocked to see this had an editor: Ivan Ublyudok. Shame on you Ivan. This is awful, awful editing. You should withdraw from the editing pool on here.

Over all I really liked the first page and thought the second page was nowhere near as good. Re-edit this and take more care with the sex scene. And no wanking as you write!

seacoastcoupleseacoastcoupleabout 12 years ago
So incredibly sexy!

This is simply smokin' hot! Thank you for sharing this post.

syd_v63syd_v63about 12 years ago
Ignore the Anons

Spelling and grammar are an issue here but other wise keep writing.

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 12 years ago
Oops - rampaNt

Ironic, ain't it!

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 12 years ago
Hot but irritating

The action was fine, but the errors were rampart! I had to re-read too many sentences in order to figure out who was doing whom.

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