The Trip Pt. 01

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It was when I started to feel his body respond, his hands crept towards my belly, resting there for a while, almost protectively. My heartbeat pounded in my head and I forced myself to open my eyes. Realising where we were, the sounds returned suddenly and I was aware of the room full of people in the water and out of the water with us.

I ducked to the side and apologised profusely, hurriedly making my way to the steps and out of the pool. Not looking back once even as I was sure I was giving everyone a sight of my naked back half running back to the dressing rooms.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

where is the rest???

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Was rather hoping for more of the tale.

I read this now and again and am still wondering when you might get round to adding further episodes. Was rather looking forward to how well our heroine gets on the rest of her trip.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please don't ghost

It has been six moths since even the last comment and we are all eager to hear more of this tale. So, please don't ghost on us. It was a very sweet start and deserves to be continued. Hope RL is not too busy for you to write.

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KelteriserKelteriseralmost 6 years ago
good start

will be interested to see where this story goes ..

I see it is your first submission - i enjoyed it nicely written - keep at it

bigbob2406bigbob2406almost 6 years ago

Hope there is more to come of this.

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