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Samantha glanced down shyly at the top of his curly head, afraid to move for the sake of him stopping what he was doing to her now.
Ian leaned into her, bringing his lips closer to her moist pussy. He heard her inhale quickly and hold her breath, as he took his long index finger and ran it swiftly over her pussy, letting it caress her clit. She gasped and jerked forward. Surprising him by how wet she had become so quickly. Taking his finger away long enough to tease her, he shoved it into her pussy roughly.
She hollered and it brought a smile to his face, leaning into her he extended his tongue to have his first taste of her pussy when she whimpered.
"Ian..."
Hearing his name spoken on a moan, jerked his mind out of the lustful haze it had been in.
Ian jerked away, standing at his full height of 6'5. Samantha stood against the door holding her hands in the position he had placed them in, with her breast on display as well as her completely exposed pussy.
With half-hooded eyes Samantha silently begged him to finish what he had started, but his mind wouldn't let him. His dick wanted him too badly, but the thought of her being his best friend; someone that was almost a sister to him, didn't seat right with him making her a notch on his belt.
Pushing her gently to the side, he opened the door. Not being able to speak he just left her, shocked and unbelievably hurt.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoNope, nope. Controlling jerk can go to hell, I don't want her to be with him and since that's where this went I am done.
Comentarista82almost 9 years ago...and it's looking very promising. I imagine you followed other poster's advice to have someone edit/look over, as it could benefit from this. Otherwise, interesting to know Ian's felt this way about Samantha and she had a crush on him for a long time. I"m looking forward to reading more.
brownskinnedcutieover 9 years agoSalty ans pissed at Ian! Asshole!!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoYou have a good story line but your poor spelling and grammar are very distracting.
I suggest you get an editor to help you with them. here is an excellent grammar checker called "Right Writer." I used it years ago and it drastically helped me improve my writing.
