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Click hereI stood for a moment, looking directly at Barbara Chaykin. "You'll pay for this." I said. Barbara apprised me coolly, as though I were some interesting zoo specimin.
"You can't buck the system." she said, breezily.
"The system is one thing. But you - you - will pay for this."
There was the momentary flicker of discomfort in her expression. A chink in her ever-so-smug armour. I turned and walked out of the office, following my sisters. Mark, the jacked-up tea-boy, made his way to intercept Jennifer as she led our way out.
"Ladies! Can I get you anyth-"
"Get the fuck out of my way, waterboy."
We left the building, and went home. We even made it into the car before each of us began to cry.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoAny writer who leaves a story with no ending, doesn't deserve to be allowed to write here again. Been since 2008 (your last writing) and you couldn't finish the one from '07? Did you maybe use another title to the story? Well you just lost me from any further of your writings. Wish you well.
Anonymousover 9 years agoI'm fairly new to Lit and to this point have avoided series. I stumbled upon your offering and was immediately drawn in. This is a series which hits all the right notes, of strong writing, interesting story, and hot erotica. I hope you will find the time or desire to provide an ending worthy of it to this point.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoLike seriously...what. the. fuck. This story is awesome. I actually took the time to read it and I usually don't read a series or anything like that. Come back, write more babe. We're all waiting for the end to this awesomely crafted story.
Anonymousover 11 years agoWish you would continue this awesome story, where the hell are you D:
Anonymousover 11 years agoYou are great at story telling. The ending was brilliant even though I could of done with more closure. Nonetheless all five parts was a great read! Thank you x
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoPlease continue its brilliant and im at the brink of a meltdown. This is such an amazing story.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoPlease finish this, its been left on an annoyingly good cliffhanger. I love your work please continue to write these great stories
BamaNItalyalmost 13 years agoAre you gonna finish this? Seems like a loose string!? Otherwise loved the story, thus the feeedback. BamaNItaly..
