All Comments on 'Three Square Meals Ch. 103'

Spain Vs Portugal!!!!

Ronaldo proved his worth again!!!

(I'm doing this cuz I'm bored and I'm waiting for 104)

Appreciate you letting us know 104 was up for moderation. To find that myself do I have to use something called URL because if so I won't be able to do it myself. I think someone tried to tell me that once before. Can you tell how long it has been posted there or is it not time specific ? Thanks for any other info. By the way it's still 06/15/18 here even though it shows this will post as the 16th.

You mentioned the soccer/football match...I've been watching the tours of Chicago with Geoffrey Baer on PBS. They had their fund drive last week, and kept spamming a few of the 18 different tours he filmed almost nightly. These things are like four hours long with all the 15 minute fund drive breaks they take like twice an hour. Talk about killing time waiting for the next chapter to be released.

I think Diego Costa played well😏

(Ronaldo dived a lot)

There is no time of posting. It just says that it is awaiting moderation. I'd say it would be up soon (within a few hours). However, I am only guessing.

I have seen new stories post as early as just after midnight, but usually, it's closer to 3am. That's Eastern Time. That's midnight Pacific, 8am UK time.

Thanks for the reply.

Just watched a movie and spent half the time thinking of this story. Tef you really should /need to score a flim deal for your great writing and imagination. IMO

Really glad to see Rachel and dad reconcile, as it was touching, but very confused to why the scene with Tashana threatening the dad was included when the dad was already wracked with guilt and going to reconcile with Rachel anyway. Maybe she isn't the mind reader but why not understand some basic body language?

Hi. I continue to be amazed by your epic story. A note about server technology. There are multiple companies today in 2018 that offer cluster operating systems that make thousands of individual physical computers look like one giant fault tolerant computer to the software running on it with 100% up time. These include IBM, INTEL, Amazon, ORACLE, and Google. 700 years from now, this should not be a technical problem.

Tashana was such a cunt to Henry. I don't care what her excuse is it was uncalled for. If I was Rachel I'd smack the shit out of her

I'm not usually a fan of NTR but would really like to see how the team would react if the evil progenitor stole Jehanna and enslaved her through the usual method of thrall creation. Just to mess with John.

How would the team react if forced to meet a brainwashed Jehanna on the battlefield. Would they be able to recapture her, and effectively re-rape her to switch her allegiance from her new master back to John?

Do you have older siblings? Because that was a classic overprotective older sibling "conversation" while somewhat over the top also got her message across with no means of misinterpretation, besides Rachel didn't hear it

"John led Jehanna out into the corridor and interlaced his fingers with hers as they headed towards the grav-tube. "Avery's call actually tipped us off that you were in danger. We looked into your abduction and figured out that Weber and Buckingham were behind it, using Special Forces soldiers based in Tartarus. He really made a difference.""

I may be mis-remembering, but didn't Avery call and can and call again and again? This should be something that John relays to Jehanna. It seems to me to be important that she is well aware of the worry and concern that her co-workers and boss had over her disappearance, and especially that her boss, who warned her to be careful, looks on her as something other than a headline producer.

I know Tef wanted Lynnette to be a 'secret' Lioness for the story, ... but she really should have opted for Rachel to heal her, or to stop after one Load from John, ... with no need to hide from her peers. And no sneaky thoughts that she might be John's puppet. She'd be able to walk again, be a bit refreshed and stronger than before, stop there, for now. ;-) TTFN

WTF??? Did I miss something? Did the author have a stroke?

It is like the person who wrote the previous 50 chapters upended the story and started from scratch. New/alternative personalities for characters. Lack of respect for scenes that have already played out.

This was a shit installment. As much as I gripe about the overuse of the self recriminations and loathing by the protagonist, the story had a rhythm thus far that was blow to the shitter.

Damn disappointing I've wasted this much time on a story that shits on the reader.

Smokepole

@Smokepole

You talk a lot of shit, yet you're still here reading it.

If it's so disappointing that you've sunk so much time into it, do us all a favor and DON'T.

Then at least readers who like the story won't have to listen to you bitching about how much you still hate it, despite the fact that we're a 100+ chapters in.

103 chapters fucking great job. I hope all survive.

I'm with skippersdad and enjoying this. Interesting to see how Jehanna?? and Lynette will get on

Consolidate, repair and reconstruct, ... work on projects, training. swimming lessons in the Lagoon, ... preparing for meetings with High Command, thanking Maria, topping up Lynette, 3rd load for Jehanna, first (shared) load for the Nymphs, so a half dozen new girls added in one day, so only one Nightmare trip that night, ... much to do, but not battles this time, ... except for sparring and meeting with High Command, .... a fun chapter, .... I wonder how many reshaping's (how strong) the ships' armor will be after this time, ... ;-) TTFN

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"Like I said, we'd be lost without you."

oh oh predicting the future perhaps!!

ranec1

Okay, regarding the compromising Admiral Lynette Devereux, ... it very much does look like John has made her into his puppet, and Lynette was afraid of that, ... after the first dose, and 14 hours of healing and changing, she was younger and fitter than she was, .... Dana should have taken a wide range of images at that time and based her halo projection of Lynette on that younger /sexer Admiral (in her 30's or so) as her new look from Rachel, the Angel of Terra healing her gunshot wounds, then she could court Charles as her Admiral self, this would be socially easier and yet she would still have enough years showing for her high rank's (Admiral) Gravatas to function, ...

I take it that Tef has no military background and was just looking at his story requirements, ... but even in the 28th century, what John did to Lynette was very wrong, then he got her into the Fleet Admiral's chair, .... so, yeah, she's a puppet, ... bad boy Tef! :-l ttfn

Okay, regarding the compromising of Admiral Lynette Devereux, ... it very much does look like John has made her into his puppet, and Lynette was afraid of that, ... after the first dose, and 14 hours of healing and changing, she was younger, and fitter than she ever was, .... Dana or Faye should have taken a wide range of images at that time and based her halo projection of Lynette on that younger /sexer Admiral (in her 30's or so) as her new look from Rachel, the Angel of Terra healing her gunshot wounds, then she could court the also rejuvenated Charles, as her Admiral self, this would be socially easier and yet she would still have enough years showing for her high rank's (Admiral) Gravatas to function, ...

I take it that Tef has no military background and was just looking at his story requirements, ... but even in the 28th century, what John did to Lynette was very wrong, then he got her into the Fleet Admiral's chair, .... so, yeah, she's a puppet, ... bad boy Tef! :-l ttfn

So John has fed two women three times now, both within a few hours if each other. This mean back to back trips to the Astral Plane?

The Invictus crew consolidates, repairs and reconstructs their ship, ... and they work on various projects, perform training. give those lovely Nymphs more swimming lessons in the Lagoon, ... John prepares for an important meeting with High Command, he thanks Maria, and topps up Lynette (#3 load), and the 3rd load for Jehanna as well, and a first (shared) load for the Nymphs, so almost a half dozen new girls added in one day, so they'll only have to face one Nightmare trip that night, ... much to do, but no space battles this time, ... just some sparring matches, and that soon to be meeting with High Command, .... this was a fun chapter, .... I am wondering how many total reshaping's (8 to 10 reshaping's) and how strong is that going to make the ships' armor after this emergency refit time (15 times, 20 times titanium strength?), ... ;-) TTFN

Michael56Smith-8 months ago-Repeat:

Okay, regarding the compromising of Admiral Lynette Devereux, ... it very much does look like John has made her into his puppet, and Lynette was afraid of that, ... after the first dose, and 14 hours of healing and changing, she was younger, and fitter than she ever was, .... Dana or Faye should have taken a wide range of images at that time and based her halo projection of Lynette on that younger /sexer Admiral (in her 30's or so) as her new look from Rachel, the Angel of Terra healing her gunshot wounds, then she could court the also rejuvenated Charles, as her Admiral self, this would be socially easier and yet she would still have enough years showing for her high rank's (Admiral) Gravatas to function, ...

I take it that Tef has no military background and was just looking at his story requirements, ... but even in the 28th century, what John did to Lynette was very wrong, then he got her into the Fleet Admiral's chair, .... so, yeah, she's a puppet, ... bad boy Tef! :-l ttf

Michael56Smith8 months ago

Okay, regarding the compromising of Admiral Lynette Devereux, ... it very much does look like John has made her into his puppet, and Lynette was afraid of that, ... after the first dose, and 14 hours of healing and changing, she was younger, and fitter than she ever was, .... Dana or Faye should have taken a wide range of images at that time and based her halo projection of Lynette on that younger /sexer Admiral (in her 30's or so, maybe 40) So she'd be explaining to others that her new look was from Rachel, the Angel of Terra healing her gunshot wounds, then she could court the also somewhat rejuvenated Charles, as her Admiral self, this would be socially easier and yet she would still have enough years showing for her high rank's (Admiral) Gravatas to function, ...

-- I take it that Tef has no military background and was just looking at his story requirements, ... but even in the 28th century, what John did to Lynette was very wrong, then he got her into the Fleet Admiral's chair, .... so, yeah, she's a puppet, ... you're a bad boy Tef! :-l ttf