Three Square Meals Ch. 053

That's one long-ass chapter

But damn

.... and Rachel said, "This is hard for me to prove without a fresh and willing test subject, but I suspect when you first start feeding a girl, she needs to adapt to taking your loads. My body is specially adapted to thrive off your cum now, so I can digest several pints in just a few hours." ... And as more girls join with John, and he slits one load among them all, it takes much less time to be fully absorbed, ... to aid in emergency healing during battle, they might already have passed the time when all the cum was gone, ... unless there is some kind of a slowdown that John or his Matriarch can employ, ... anyway, think on it, it needs to be addressed, .... ;-) ttfn

Heck yeah! Good thinking there Vadasr, those Trankaran Forgemasters just might have an insight or two that could help our deliciously curvy Chief Engineer, ... Onyxium and Etherite both have problems combining / bonding with other minerals, ... so seek expert advice, .... makes sense to me, .... I wonder why Dana didn't think of it, or why the extremely intelligent, but somewhat distracted, Rachel didn't either, ... ;-) ttfn

-- Early in the chapter as the girls were coming onto the bridge, ... "as Dana and Rachel walked over to their posts at Engineering and Tactical, while Irillith moved to sit in the dormant station" ... so, did the Doctor replace Calara at Tactical, and is Calara running the Communication station now? or is Rachel helpfully manning one of the secondary Tactical stations, that are there in addition to Calara's primary position, the cruiser has three built in tactical stations, with a number of other sites that could be made into tactical stations, ...? okay I picked my nit, carry on, .... ;-) ttfn

What a great turnaround! I can tell you I didn't skim much of this (mega)chapter!

Before, there were glimpses of quality and a lot of filler - I nearly quit. This was quite the opposite. You kept up a slow burn, then smoothly ramped up the pace of the action until the big finale. 5 stars, well earned.

Excellent

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If the forgemasters and the rest of that race are so good with metals, bonding, alloying etc, why weren't they seriously consulted about the problems with mixing/combining/bonding Etherite crystals and Onyxium ore.

It has to be something in the molecular structure of each of those substances doesn't it and they may have a fast answer using their usual techniques etc.

Wow, wish I could give this one more than 5. Exceptional climax!

That was Fucking Awesome again.

Best chapter yet. 5 stars I wish I could give you more. Awesome

patiently waiting for the yellow N

🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 Yes, that is now seven stars, only because I expect it will keep getting better....

Bye bye PJ (Progenitor John), ... locked away, throw away the key, ... I actually liked Irillith in this chapter, quite the turnaround, ... ;-) ttfn

FAYE! -- I am loving watching Faye grow / blossom / get cuter all the time, .... I have reread this series a few times and I just love Faye, .... Yay, Perky Purple Pixie Power! ... ;-) ttfn

Now that was a damn fine story. Well done!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

"How did a cretin like you manage to do that?!"

@Texster: Your comprehension level isn't great, is it? You'll need to read further to see what was truly up with the ship "trapped" in the gravity well, but even with just the information we've already been provided, the rest of us know that ship is fine. He had three hours until his decaying orbit would become dangerous, and Terran military ships were less than one hour away. A smart person might wonder why that guy wanted John to come save him, when other ships were closer, but you're not that smart, are you?

@Leifson. The guy who you’re talking to, well his name says it all…. The thing is that every comment here is pointless. First being rude and derogatory about a free story is pathetic. Second this chapter is years old so the thing is out and 100 following chapters are out, so no changes will be made and the characters and storyline are set in stone. Third at patreon where the up to date story is 20 yes 20 chapters ahead is where comments are useful as is the cutting edge of the story and mistakes can easily be fixed.

So Leifson, your comments are valid and smoke pole is an idiot for thinking a years old chapter that’s even been published in a freaking book, can be changed or that the author cares.

Just on the side can you imagine changing a chapter and accidentally changing something that affects the next 120 chapters that are written and published… oh the nightmare.

@ Texster. Nope progenitor John is here for another 50 or so chapters. John winged cries and moans about it and lets it threaten the entire federation and the greys and so on. He needs good tech but he crawls into a ball and cries every time he thinks about booting PJ and getting the tech and skills that PJ withholds.

It’s fucking mind numbing. You can and will skip paragraph after paragraph till you find the end of the PJ section in that chapter.

I have a few critical things to say, but I don’t want them to overshadow how impressed I am with your writing, not just in this chapter, but overall. You have come a long way from chapter 1, to the point where I now consider you a professional.

Now, I have not been shy about the fact that I have not enjoyed the PJ storyline, and have felt that it has negatively impacted the tale in the last several chapters. I look at it the way I look at the Donald Trump presidency, I didn’t like it when it started, I hated it during, and now that it’s over, I don’t ever want to see it again… But I fear I haven’t seen the last of it. I know there’s 80+ chapters to go to get to where you are riding today, so it’s not like I will be influencing you with this comment, but I hope there isn’t much of this storyline in the next few sections.

The main problem I have with PJ is that his actions go beyond acceptable limits into evil territory, and even though Goodjohn takes control back, he is still responsible for the actions of his body when he’s not in control. For instance, the ship that he left trapped in the gravity well of a black hole, probably didn’t survive, and that’s not OK. And that’s not even talking about all the extra deaths he personally inflicted in the Trankaran battles. I have a hard time reconciling those actins and still rooting for John.

Switching gears, I know you did a pronunciation guide for the girls, I wonder if you could provide your pronunciations of the different species we’ve encountered?

Thanks in advance!

Chapter #053, Progenitor John (PJ), also Psycho John works too, and he is now locked away in John's mind, along with all the useful Progenitor information, Schematics and knowledge that PJ hoarded, ... ***spoiler alert*** it will be over 80 more chapters before John will choose to finally confront his 'warped' Guide*** ... Much knowledge yet to be gained, and many adventures yet to be read, .... ;-) TTFN