To Protect and Serve Ch. 11

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Another 5 star , but again mot enough

Oh and about being butchered like shamira, in real life and not having those self healing aspect, including paralyzed parts is bloody , so thinking about ending a life is a total normal ..... Perfect evilin

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Another 5 star , but again mot enough

Oh and about being butchered like shamira, in real life and not having those self healing aspect, including paralyzed parts is bloody , so thinking about ending a life is a total normal ..... Perfect evilin

TulipfuzzTulipfuzzalmost 3 years ago

Wonderful writing. However, the typos and other errors are an aggravating distraction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Ha.

hahaha. Awesome Chapter 4 is awesome!! LOVE your work. I started off reading Doctor Wolf's items, then you came up in a top rated with Strays, been addicted to your work every since!!

PoutineFanPoutineFanalmost 16 years ago
LOVED it!

I particularly liked the image put in my head by the last scene... a very amusing visual :) Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!

skibum86skibum86almost 16 years ago
Couldnt stop!!

Like the three am reader, I simply could not stop reading this epic adventure (stayed up ALL night reading). I was enthralled by you other sci-fi & fantasy stories, but I simply can not think of a word to convey the excellence of this story. I hope, no I beg (on hands and knees with puppy dog eyes if need be) that these characters will continue their adventure into the foreseeable future.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great story but your killing me

I love your stories and I know everyone has a life to lead to but your killing me making us wait for the next chapter. Great work and I am waiting not so patiently for the next installments. Thanks for all of your hard work on your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I was upset

when "Full Moon Strays" just sort of stopped. But you have surpassed it with THIS story. Wonderful work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Greatness

I love this story. a great blend of action, humour, and erotica

rgraham666rgraham666almost 16 years ago
Damn

This is so fucking good.

An epic fantasy with a deft human touch. That's damned difficult to do and the Evil One has pulled it off in style.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
love it

its 3am again and i am up reading this story please write more about these characters they are so good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Thanks

Ack! How is a woman suppose to balance work and family? Great post, thanks for sharing it. While I would love to see a great separation between the Lesser and Greater dragons, like behavior, language or sensitivity, I think the number of characters you have developed is mind-boggling.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Wunderbar!!

I love these characters.

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