- Group Sex
- Triad Ch. 06
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I slept with Abby and Jean that night, making love to each of them in the middle of the night. Connie and Anna went off to my bedroom in the other house, and admitted the next day that they too had a highly sexual night.
By week's end, I was nearly a basket case having become the sexual 'toy boy' for the four women. I stepped up the enhancement supplements and hormones I was taking to keep Anna and Abby happy, and doubled the daily dosage of my Cialis.
At the same time, the women refined their relationship with each other. I was party to some of the discussions they had about their new relationships. Jean and Connie deferred to Don on some items, but since he was absent some questions and boundaries remained open for discussion.
I did take a picture of the four women nude with their arms around each other, standing on top of one of the sand dunes between our houses. I sent it to Jean, and she in turn used it in a suggestive and revealing email she sent her husband.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoAs my comment on Ch. 05 indicates, I had questions concerning where the new laissez faire attitude of the Triad partners would logically lead. And I had not thought of what the Anonymous (Jahoo) just before me on this chapter commented about the disrespect towards the Triad that was inherent in Sean's wife Tracy's attitude.
I also feel some of the objection voiced by the majority negative comments. Although I am not sure how much objection -- if any -- I should feel. This is, after all, a Literotica story, not boring suburbia USA.
My point in this comment is that the negative majority comments are not indicative of the readership.
Assuming from the very displeased comment of Anonymous (Jahoo), that he rated 1 star, it takes 12 readers rating 5 stars to counterbalance back up to 4.69, which is still less than the 4.71 this chapter received.
Conclusion: a negative minority commented their displeasure. The vast pleased majority did not comment, instead rated 5 (or did not rate), and passed on.
To me, considering the controversial nature of chapters 04, 05, and 06, the ratings are VERY high, revealing a pleased readership. Also a tribute to the very skilled storytelling and language ability of SteveWallace.
Paul in Oklahoma
Anonymousalmost 8 years ago4 it hit rock bottom and 5 it began digging. Now, you've reached the Earth's core. Tracy (Sean's wife) sent him to the set to make love to Anna?? WTF?? What about Anna's partners?? What a stone bitch. "Oh, it's OK with me so Who gives a crap what her partners think!" What an ass. That whole theme and the unbelievable way the characters and "Jean" deal with it ruined this story. This chapter is so unreadable I think you should just stop the bleeding and delete 4 on and make this a 3 part series.
-Jahoo-
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI dont understand the detractors here.... Great story, love the emotional connection between everyone
Ahazuraabout 8 years agoThank you very much for sharing your story. I think your writing is excellent and from what I can see you have a great editor.
I really enjoyed the first three chapters. I respect your right and decision to add the unfaithful aspect of the story line. It wasn't my personal favorite but I am admittedly a romantic. I like my love stories to be simple and easy. I do think you handled it well however. The drifting into expanding so many people is a bit off putting to me. I feel that adding so many partners is diluting the love/experience that the original three have. I feel it is drifting into more stroke story waters. Not that there is anything wrong with that. It is just that for me personally I like your characters and would hate to see their sense of uniqueness buried under too much flesh.
These are just some thoughts I have and I cannot stress enough how much I appreciate your ideas and ability.
Thanks again for sharing your works,
Ahaz
