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Click hereThen I updated her on what we had learned about her kids in Iran. Her daughter was missing - but probably in a good way - just run away to be with her young love. We were still working on locating both and extracting them from Iran - but I warned her that her son may be a very difficult, if not lost, cause to her at this point, after years of heavy radical Islamic indoctrination. Nevertheless we would do our best. I also explained it was time to finally dump Grayson and get started legally on that, protect your own money, but please wait just a bit to see if Grayson came to you for some multi-million dollar "necessary" pay-off request. I needed to know just who such a payment was supposed to go to.
I also told Farah that a distant relative, a second cousin, a harmless looking nerdy young man was going to need to stay with her for a couple of weeks. He was actually one of our most deadly bodyguard/assassin agents - made even more deadly because he looked so innocuous. He was a just-in-case to protect her from her OTHER "bodyguards" until she could dump Grayson and get those jerks out of her house and life, permanently.
I felt pretty comfortable we were now talking in mere weeks to free her from Grayson. But that whole forecasting the future is wrought with chaotic uncertainties.
And about now Rachel reported the "SNL" and "neutristor" information. SNL could very well be "Sandia National Laboratory" and the "neutristor" was an actual new solid state replacement for the "miniature neutron pulse tube", basically a "particle accelerator on chip" that HAD recently been invented at SNL. The particles were neutrons which could make the critical mass of Highly Enriched Uranium (HEU) much smaller and fission detonation of the critical mass more complete via direct neutron pumping. So this was yet another key component for much smaller highly efficient nuclear bombs - as in those most usable in missiles. The smaller the warhead, the smaller the needed missile at ANY range - from 100 miles to 12,000 miles "Intercontinental." So it was just possible Grayson had some number of both krytron high speed switches and these brand new neutristors already in his possession on his 707.
They could not be allowed to reach Iran, whatever it took.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoGood story.
But how could ANYONE want or expect this shit show of a marriage to reconcile at some point?
Ummm...they are stuck in what is going on now. I get that.
But after it settles? Assuming they all survive? Exactly how does a normal, well adjusted man just accept that his wife became a depraved whore with another man just because she got a little bored with her admittedly exceptional husband. She really loved him. Just wanted him to be more "alpha" than she thought he was. And life got a bit mundane. So...she decided she'd fuck the powerful billionaire. And life would turn out as a fairy tale.
And she turned into the skankiest whore ever. And this was before she even knew he was a highly trained agent/spy.
But the MC is just supposed accept that she really now doesn't want to be a whore...but must continue to save mankind.
But afterwards...theybwill settle back into married life and start having babies together?
Right. Sure that'll happen.
A sane man would really start procreating with the opportunistic lying whore. Gotcha.
Wargamerover 2 years agoThe angst and pure tension between the parties is palpable
Well done.
I do not know how anyone could come back from this and that includes Elaine now.
4/5
Anonymousover 3 years agoLove this story..... I also hope this is heading to reconciliation! He is almost as guilty as her! I love the use of their faith in telling the story! Great detail and a good understanding of global politics
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoBlah blah blah....
Just divorce the fucking whore end of story..she cheated on her marriage, broke her wedding vows .n disrespect him..
Those r a one strike n out..situation.
Jim is such a pussy. Did he really want a whore as his wife,?
Kick the slut to curb.
Better be crew like hand her divorce paper in front of her patents n tell them congratulation your daughter is a cheating whore...
teedeedubalmost 8 years agothat there's too much fluff. Good detailed background information (as long as it's mostly accurate) is what makes a good story great. I too was afraid that this was going to turn into a soapbox but it hasn't. I must say, I had never thought about the loss of the SEAL team 6 chopper post OBL as possibly a 'sacrifice'. That's a scary thought.......
justbobkcalmost 8 years agoAuthorI just submitted chapter 7. It was pretty much finished last Monday but I was stuck just a bit and also wanted some feedback from my readers on Chapter 6.
I absolutely LOVE the comment from Affecteffect. Made me LOL.
I really appreciate the time and effort put into that.
But alas, I guess I AM a wordy bastard and it is what it is.
I'm thinking one more chapter after 7 to wrap this tale up.
Thanks to everyone hanging in there and continuing reading. Could be several more days before 7 actually gets posted.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoBut its just too wordy, full of distracting pointless digressions, and tedious mental meandering. I might read more, if I can remember what has come before. At this point I think its just an apology for compassion, weakness, sympathy, and forgiveness. What wrong with that? It overlooks the requirements of sorrow, guilt, regret, confession, penance, and restitution, all requirements for true forgiveness and absolution in the Judaeo/Christian theology. Rachael's only regret is that Grayson turned out to be an inferior replacement for her husband. If Grayson had been just nice, courteous, and respectful, and very rich, Rachael would have abandoned her husband without a second thought of guilt or regret. Her remorse is externally driven by the adverse conditions and circumstances resulting from her choosing Grayson over her husband. Until she demonstrates a true change of character and values, she's just one more whore who wants her guilt absolved and forgotten. She'll make a perfect mate for a loser like Jim.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoEver heard the phrase "Putting lipstick on a pig"? Attempting to "influence" your readers into feeling sympathy for Rachel and forgiving her for her past, present and most certainly future "missteps" is a poor strategy for winning over or keeping your audience. While noble, it seems rather fruitless this late in the game to be trying to save Rachel's honor! Besides ... whores like Rachel have no honor!
Don't believe me ... take a look at your scores for this series:
True Lies Redux - 4.40
True Lies Redux Ch. 02 - 4.42
True Lies Redux Ch. 03 - 4.23
True Lies Redux Ch. 04 - 4.33
True Lies Redux Ch. 05 - 4.15
True Lies Redux Ch. 06 - ***3.64***
Rather telling don't you think?
Seems to me your readers are trying to tell you something which is don't attempt to salvage what is unsalvageable and don't force reconciliation when none is clearly merited.
Scores may not be what motivates you but the fact is, fair or not, many readers look to them first when determining if a story is worth their time and a downward turn (Ch. 06) doesn't bode well for any writer.
Food for thought as you round out what up till now has been a pretty good tale.
Hope you take this in the spirit it was meant even with this rather obvious and poor attempt to "influence" you.
Regards,
Anon
Affecteffectalmost 8 years agoAs we entered the bedroom I slipped my hand into her panties to finger her pussy. Her pussy was already soaked with natural lube. She was definitely ready and started to disrobe.
I couldn’t wait to get started, but first I needed to take a piss. I went into the bathroom attached to the bedroom and closed the door. I almost locked it out of force of habit, but didn’t. Ever notice how we do things automatically without thinking?
While opening my zipper I noticed that the metal parts were silver colored. Wow, I’ve seen zippers with brass colored metal pars too. I wonder why that is. Maybe there is a price difference. It’s amazing that zippers work at all. I wonder who invented the zipper. I’ll have to remember to google it.
I took my cock out and aimed it at the toilet bowl. My piss stream was faint yellow so I must be fairly well hydrated. My piss is very yellow when I’m dehydrated, and clear when I have been drinking lots of beer. I wonder what the ideal color of piss is. But I digress…………………….
