- Non-Erotic
- What a Fool
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Click hereWith those final words she pulled from me and went to him taking his hand and in a throaty voice pregnant with desire she spoke, "well lover let's begin our adventure." The two left the room and walked down to Devon's Lexus where he opened the door for my wife and the two kissed one more time before Kate got in.
Before they were down the street I placed my wedding band on our dining room table with a note. One of the things I had done in the previous week was to have a jeweler cut through the ring. When that task was done I had him put an engraving on one side of the cut showing year we were married with the present year on the other side of the cut. The fact that my wife had never even noticed that I had not been wearing my wedding ring for days clearly spoke volumes about how much she even noticed me anymore.
The note I left was simple:
Karla,
I told you that you had to do what you had to do. When I said those words it was not an approval or acceptance of your actions, just an acknowledgement of them. When you find this note I will be gone. I am starting anew without you. The house is yours as I have signed a quit claim and most of the savings are yours now too. Have a good life and I truly hope you find happiness.
If you are trying to figure out why I had my wedding ring cut let me sum it up for you. Do you remember the day you first started this foolishness and you asked me how much I loved you? Well do you remember that I said just like my ring it will go on forever? The cut in the ring symbolizes the cessation of my love as a consequence of you betrayal. I had the two years inscribed on the ring to remind you of when we started and when we ended.
One last thing, tomorrow you will be served with the divorce papers citing irreconcilable differences and nothing could be truer than that.
I wish you luck on your new job and I know you will be great. Have a wonderful life.
Tom
- COMMENTS
Wildbill196422 days agoThanks, but NO thanks. No balls couldn't even confront her with pending consequences, BEFORE the deed went down. No balls author couldn't even give an epilog...... NO score at from me!
TrainerOfBimbos25 days agoSo passive aggressive. He knew it was over long before that night, so why not just say "Well, this isn't working for me anymore babe. I've packed my bags, have a nice life." This leaving with a sappy note and some sort of symbolism with the ring is just so... I guess you were shooting for dramatic, but it didn't have any oomph to it. When you take the lack of presence of Tom and combine it with the brevity of the story, I'm just kind of left wondering who he was even? Heck, even the professional wife fucker had more personality.
Anonymous3 months agoWow, was that bad, or what? Lame story, worse with the lack of spine and the author making the scumbag predator out to be an innocent party - with no punishment out of it all? Seriously bent author ...
Anonymous3 months agoIt's hard to understand the mentality of any writer who'd want to create such a weak main character and such a lame story. A broken ring and a highly paid off divorce is her penalty for the selfishness and evilness in her heart? Just incredibly stupid. You do your readers a great disservice by throwing this garbage out there and encouraging the female dogs to run around loose and think there won't be any consequences. You obviously have an agenda here, which means the heart and mind that wrote this is maybe just as twisted up as the product. You need to get some help. But more importantly, you need to not write trash that will destroy other people's lives by its influence. By writing this, you're doing exactly the same thing as the scumbag predator in your story. By not including any accountability or penalties upon him or the selfish excuse for a wife, you're just as bad as he is. Pathetic.
