What the Lightening Reveals

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Two siblings show their love to each other during a storm.
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I love the rain, the sounds and smells that come with it, the desire to be close to someone you love and just snuggle. In my case, that person is my brother but he doesn't know about my obsession with him or my longing to feel his electric touch. Sure he's my brother and all but if you were the sister of the hottest guy in school, you'd understand my dilemma. Aaron is my twin, we're 18 and seniors in high school, only problem is that I'm a virgin and I don't know if he feels the same way but I guess there's no time like the present to find out. The thunderstorm makes the perfect excuse to snuggle up in bed with him because he knows I use to be deathly scared of lightening when I was little, it's a fear I grew out of years ago but he doesn't need to know that.

I creep down the hallway to his room and shut the door. Silence, I know he's asleep because he's snoring gently, I tip-toe to his bed and stop. He rustles under the covers and I freeze. Have I been heard? He turns onto his back and continues dreaming, I smile nervously. I wonder what he's dreaming about...

As if he read my mind, he begins talking in his sleep, it's not distinct, at first, and he's only mumbling like a drunk. After a few minutes, he begins to make sense and he moans my name, "Sloane.." Goose bumps spread all over my body and I bite my lip. It was probably a mistake, there's no way he could feel the same. Twincest is a major taboo and most people frown upon it, what are the odds that he could be into me too? I begin to move to the door, this is crazy and ridiculous; I'm going to make a fool of myself.

"Sloane.." he moans again. "Fuck me, Sloane". I turn around and he's still asleep. He's dreaming of me? He does feel the same way and this is my chance to confess my love to him. I slip into his bed and undress, leaving clothes on the floor. The motions wake him up and he turns to me, "Sloane, why are you in my bed and how long have you been in here?" I blush a bright pink that's not noticed in the dark.

"Let's just say I've been here long enough to tell you had a good dream." I whisper confidently, knowing my answer will reveal how long I've been there and how much I know. I scoot closer to him and feel his bare chest against mine, he's wearing boxers but I can feel his rock hard cock prod just above my pussy. I bite my lip and repress my urge to moan.

"Are you naked?" he asks curiously, I mount him as an answer. Lightening illuminates the room to reveal my bare breasts and he gasps, thrusting upwards unintentionally. He pulls me close and I can't help but kiss him, the moment feels right. Our lips melt together passionately, our tongues twist around in each other's mouth and we feel a spark of excited. The air grows thick with the smell of our musk mixing together.

"What if Mom and Dad find out? We'll be in trouble for sure," I chuckle softly at his fear "don't worry now, just lay back and let me do all the work. I've been wanting to do this for a long time." I pull off his boxers to expose his 7" long cock, I continue to kiss him as I do this but once its exposed I stop. I begin to move my head down his neck and chest, kissing his body once every inch as I make my way down. I lick up his shaft and flick my tongue onto his head, he squirms under me and it encourages me to continue.

"You're such a dirty brother, letting his twin suck his dick." I tease him before I start to suck on his balls. I give each one special attention, licking thoroughly before putting one in my mouth to suck. I'm gentle, putting thought in my actions. I move back up his shaft and trail my tongue around its head, I begin to deep throat, gagging myself on all 7" as it rams into the back of my throat. Aaron is moaning wildly and I can't take it anymore.

"Just give me your big cock!" Before he can respond, I'm shoving him into me. I bounce up and down slowly and feel him pop my cherry. The pain subsides in seconds and before long all I feel is an overwhelming sensation. I kiss his neck as I move up and down then he nibbles on my nipples and licks them, they're so sensitive that I can't handle it anymore, it feels too good. I pull away and he takes himself out, throwing me onto the bed with a sexual hunger in his eyes.

"Let me show you how it's done, sis." He guides me into doggy style and slides right in, fucking me savagely and biting my neck.

"Please stop! I'm gonna-" I cum before finishing my sentence, I squirt all over the bed and his dick. I twitch from pleasure and lay back, Aaron smiles with satisfaction. "We aren't done until I get off too" he explains. I nod in agreement, it's only fair and I'm in no rush to stop. He rams into me and I rap my legs around him, he gropes me roughly as he slams into my tight pussy and it's not long before I squirt again and again.

The bed is drenched and our thighs are soaked, salty sweat drips from our bodies. We've been going at it for an hour, the pleasure is exhausting and I'm beginning to doze off. "You're tight pussy going to make me cum." he holds me close before erupting into me, he pulses as cum floods my pussy. When he pulls out it gushes and I feel totally demolished. I look outside and the storm is over.

"I love you, sis."

"I love you too, bro."

We snuggle and drift to sleep, just twins showing sibling love.

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Short and sweet 👍

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i liked it !! people will nit pick it to death, but the more you write the better you get. personally tho, if twin brother pops her cherry, and then erupts his semen into her, its a fair bet she gets pregnant. somethin to think about on your next story.

TlalacTlalacover 9 years ago
Lightning vs. Lightening?

Just curious. Was the 'lightening' error yours or was it Literotica's? I have noticed that this error appears routinely in other stories by other authors. This error, and other similar errors, show up frequently. Some examples: 'to' where 'too' is needed, 'were' instead of 'where', 'anti' instead of 'ante', and so on ad nauseum. I wonder if the Literotica input protocol runs new stories through some sort of poorly written filter application before posting them? Perhaps an application written by a non-native English speaker? Like I said, just curious.

fefe428fefe428over 9 years ago
It had potential but....

You started off well and then it just didn't go anywhere. First off, find an editor, because you need help with your spelling and punctuation....not to mention an experienced editor can help you develop your story idea into something that isn't formulaic, and even if it is, it will be something worth reading if it's done well. That is of course if your serious about writing. If you're just doing it for fun and aren't serious about getting better don't waste your time and the time of a potential editor. The good ones are busy working with people who are serious about developing their writing skills and posting stories that readers are really interested in. They're not really into working on "stroke pieces".

You didn't take the time to develop your characters at all. You have to give the audience a chance to get to know who the characters are and care about them. You didn't describe them to us at all, so in the end all we could do was shrug our shoulders and kind of say, "Who cares?"

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great!

Very erotic but I would have added this:

I started licking my brother's hole but while buttering up his anal pepper ring with my barbed tongue, he farted. The sickly sweet odor made me vomit. The vomit blasted off his balls back ino my face. Yucko! Then the stench of my barf hit hs nose and I realized too late that he had a bad case of the runs. I opened my mouth to scream and just then a massive torrent of explosive diahrea blasted from his vomit coated asshole and flooded my mouth. I gurgled and swallowed the cocoa goodness and barfed over his legs. My barf sailed over him and into hs waiting mouth like a fountain. That's when Grandma walked in with her cane and shoved it up my ass until it came out of my mouth. Not fun, I tell 'ya!

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