Without You I Have Nothing Ch. 25

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His chant, "Air conditioned bra, Mem, air conditioned" brought her to a stop amid roars of laughter from Peter.

"She doesn't wear one," was Peter's quick reply bringing a blush to Jennifer's cheeks.

As if that wasn't enough, the sickening stench of rotting durians drove them back into the street. Peter's laughter was not appreciated nor was his comment, "They say when the durians come down the sarongs go up."

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
reallllly startin to drag...

I feel like this is a never-ending story. Every time it seems we get closer to the conclusion something new pops up. The newness, however, isn't adding to the intrigue, it's just dragging the story out more and more. Also, given the continuous circles the first 15 or so chpts took us through this is really becoming intolerable. I've tried to hold on b/c of minor improvements in the more recent chpts. and since I've invested 25 chpts of reading time thus far, but I think I may have to join the mutiny cries and abandon this ship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Faster

The story is fascinating as it moves from the pubs of Sydney to the jungle yet the characters for all their faults have not faultered.

The following of Peter's and Jennifer's love has been the constrant thread and for all the ups and downs their love is shown as true.

AJ hurry up and post the next chapter the tension is killing me - Anonymous NT Australia

Billydee2Billydee2over 16 years ago
Love the Story

But I'll say now that I really don't like where its going right now, especially with Jennifer and a certain Thug.

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