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Click hereThey found Ada and William, in each other's arms, in the bed in the big bedroom on the second floor of Brook House. The doctor said they had died peacefully in their sleep, slowly suffocated by a leak in the chimney into that room of carbon monoxide from the coal fire in the stove downstairs.
Later that week Beth and John and Daniel and Jess made one more trip up to the snowy glen half way between Brook House and Hagen's mill to release the ashes of Ada and William into the waters of the upper Wolf Creek stream.
(For fuller context to the "Wolf Creek" novella, read "The Photograph, Ch. 01: John," "The Photograph, Ch. 02: Jamie," and "Tail in the South Pacific," by sr71plt, posted in the Gay Male section of this Web site.)
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drycreeksalmost 2 years agoGreat read very entertaining. Thanks for all ur hatd work kno it was enjoyed and appreciated.
sr71pltover 7 years agoAuthorThanks for the nice comment and suggestion that this be published. An expanded version was published under the title of "Raven Possession" by habu in 2008. The paperback version seems to be out of print (and only available at humongous cost) but it's still available in e-book form at the usual on-line distributors.
Anonymousover 7 years agoYour story is what a novel is made of! Great job at telling the story and painting the picture for the minds eye to see. I will say I felt the demise of Hugh unclear, I can guess but I would have liked some validation.
Your characters were full, and realistic. Authentic. You might want to consider publishing this work. I know it is difficult to get a book out of it but have you considered an e-book? I believe you could make a lot of money off this story.
I haven't read your other work but will be doing so.
Thank you for fulfilling my desire. -Tamela
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoVery good ending but I am frustrated that she wasted so many years! She could have had all that time with William! Over all fantastic - I could have gone without having Sung Li (is that his name) that was melodramatic. And what about her grandson?! You left that part unfinished! I hope Hugh steps in and protects him from that creep and his obsession with her family.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoThis is the story of people that draw you in to their lives, even in their struggles. Reminiscent of Gone with the Wind but nicer and more interesting.
