Worlds Apart Ch. 01

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"Because if you told him, then he definitely wouldn't have believed you," Gargoyle said.

"Told me what?"

"Why we need you," Gargoyle answered. The red glow from his eyes dimmed, revealing brown eyes from behind the lens. A hiss came from the helmet as Gargoyle's hands went to his head to remove it. Underneath was a man with short black hair whose eyes seemed like they saw right through Eddy.

"You're..."

"Nice to meet you Eddy. My name is Edward Johnson and I'm you."

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
nice

but you are an idiot never writting more

dreamer3366dreamer3366over 6 years ago
Can't wait

I just love a good story and this sounds like it's gonna to be a good one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Let's wait and see what will happen next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So many possibilities...

Enjoyed the first installment and will watch as you take it further.

Looking forward to how you develop your story and Characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Interesting

Interesting story line. Last part was a but rushed I feel. Hopfully you will expand on it in the coming chapters. Like, how is it that his drawings are of a hero from another dimension and why is this hero him? Who is Eddy? Why does he keep pursuing a career that he obviously sucks at. He has the images in his head, but can't draw. I look forward to the next chapters to see if you answer all my and other readers questions

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

DJ

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