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Click hereStephen felt himself begin to lose it, but he wouldn't go without her. He reached down and massaged her clit as he began to move faster, he heard her breath draw in and out and he leaned down to kiss the soft, full lips he had come to need so badly. Christina's back arched as she stilled and she released her lips from his as she yelled his name. Stephen followed right behind her, with a groan that would make a bear shake in fear, Stephen poured himself into her.
Stephen lay his slick body on top of her and the two lovers heaved as they tried to relax their beating hearts. Stephen lifted his head only to rest his lips on hers. He had no intention of moving them, and was perfectly content fall asleep this way but Christina smiled against his lips before sliding his sweat covered body off of hers.
Stephen looked at her and wanted to tell her of his moment of clarity during their lovemaking but he knew it wasn't a good time. Girls tended to not believe declarations of love after incredible sex, hormones were still to high for it to be convincing. He'd wait.
He slipped a sheet over their tired bodies and pulled her close to him. Stephen and Christina fell asleep wrapped in each other's arms fully exhausted and fully satisfied.
- COMMENTS
KittyOh48over 8 years agoI can't wait until it all goes down! I am glad that you have the two ladies become friends instead of enemies, that was a refreshing twist. I hope Mr Basin has enough of the stolen money put away because he will need it for bail. I have a feeling Stephen is going to try something and it is going to be life threatening.
All in all except for the name mix-up the chapter was AWESOME.
ariesgirlover 8 years agoOther then a mix up with Cat's and Chris' names this was a great chapter.
I hope Cat has someone with her when she breaks the news to her dad. He seem really selfish and arrogant. I can see him trying to bully her into marrying Stephen. He has too much to lose.
senilisover 8 years agoI am no expert at writing, but I do enjoy a good story. So you ask for feedback, then her is my two cents. First of all, by enhancing your story, in making it a bit longer, I was able to flow with it. I like were this story is going. Five stars on that. I would suggest on future stories (and I do hope there will be plenty more) that you be very careful in having characters with an approximately the same name ("C"hristina / "C"atherine). About two third in the story, somehow the names got reversed. That kind of threw me off a bit and I had to go back and think it through. Take it as an Old Man commenting, because kid, you are off to a GREAT start.
redlion75over 8 years agostarting to feel like the whole catching the bad guys is dragging.all they have to do is get an audit by a forensic accountant or something to get the proof.
