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Becky wants to fuck her daddy, but otherwise has no use for the cheating asshole. No doubt she will have a plan to deal with him.

It’s a shame the author flaked out and did not continue the story.

It's good, at last, to hear Monica's reactions to this new lifestyle of "swinging." Imagining a woman's mind and consciousness is a challenge to all male writers, and TheGraduate88 has pulled it off at least as well as most of us. In places, Monica's monologue does sound more like...

The next part will be available tomorrow, and there's a scene that you all are waiting for, hehe.

Great debut story, looking forward to more :D

While I agree with ambul and 26thNC, I don't feel this is an issue with the author. I feel the author faithfully delivered a reasonable point of view of Linda with respect to the original story. I think the issue is that the libs portrayed here is pretty close to the one in the original...

That really was a borderline, yes the board members the prof and the student, both would have suffered badly ….. and now for the abusing of a cute bavarian 28 year old girl - the germans are not so outgoing like you painted us so breastfeeding in public will be a rare sight to...

This Story is very similar to the real story of my 4th wife Dee Dee. Big difference is that with Dee Dee she could NEVER EVER tell the truth. She always had some lie to tell that sounded logical, but was never the truth. LOL Dee Dee even gave off pheromones that made you fall 'in...

Tickle them? I want to worship your bare feet, Jenny.

I agree, no cuckold for the husband

Thank you, JH4Fun. I hadn't thought of a Jill or Jan story line since they weren't as directly involved in the stories. I have considered telling the whole story again from Old751's view. It was a departure from what I usually write but once it was started, I had to get it all out....

The tease is many years old now. Surely it's time for those other stories, especially the seduction of Fran (the mother).

Going OK. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Wow... i definitely want to see more of this 😳🤭

Great start cant wait for more 👏😋

How will gorgeous, very busty, and pregnant Lisa come clean with Ken about what she has become and what she now wants? Carl and June came to an arrangement so long as it was “just sex.” Lisa now seems addicted to extreme and perverted sex in front of a camera or audience, and is a...

I got it! The only thing that was missing was inside joke about a trainer saying I didn't see you on the field for the camouflage test.. and Thorne would have said thank you sir! 🤪🧐😂🤣

This story has alot of promise, hope Part 2 comes out soon..

This is a specific suggestion. The story isn’t bad and has a voice, but you can tighten it up so the reader really feels it.

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“ My father wanted to get to know Mark a bit better so they went round to the local pub for a pint, or two, and a chat. A couple of hours later they came...

Thank you so much! Please tell your friends!

Awesome story!

just keeps getting bettter

A somewhat interesting story but where is it going? What's the plot? Just some horny woman asking for male bodyguards so they can have some sex?

Johntcooksey hit it straight on! I love how you can be tender, tragic, and hilarious all in the same story. Your settings and characters appeal even to this ignorant yankee. That’s a real talent.

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Would have liked to hear from the daughters and what happened between Maureen and hetr sister.

I suppose I should have mentioned this earlier, but if you've read the story and enjoyed it, check out my other works - in particular my series The Rivals, which is all about Avilia and Sligh.

My cheeks are cramping from smiling and laughing out loud at this tale.

Should have been me !

thank you all xx

Ok, facts for @PhoenixLore1981.

You really should Google PTSD and Special Forces - apparently they are more vulnerable to PTSD than other Armed Force members. Link: https://fherehab.com/news/ptsd-in-the-special-forces/

As to the story, enjoyed it. Well done!

I could maybe get past the sex, but in my bed?! If you can't afford a motel room or car seat, you can't afford to fuck. Trifling!!

Wow! Please continue!

Truly beautiful, we are sure that there would be far fewer divorces and separations if more couples experimented in the lifestyle like this.

I liked it when you showed me the beta version, and I like it even more seeing it all together - 5 stars from me

Good story so far. Giggling like a school girl, "almost forgetting about having sex between the tents". Setting up and deceiving Rob of the purpose of the trip. I think was to get pregnant by Jon. Having sex with Rob over and over so he will think it is his baby. Giving him a drink...