I was thinking about a friend when I wrote this. I like the way fantasy can enrich your life, and change how you see everything.
It's great to get feedback as I'm new to writing this kind of story. So do email me with your reactions and thoughts. especially if there was anything you particularly liked.
Updated - it's nice to see two bits of feedback after nothing for about two years. It's a shame they are anonymous, but they were very complimentary, so I'm not complaining. But if anyone wants to mail me about the piece, that would be nice.
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East England