All the stories I write are fiction. They are about things that excite me and I hope they excite you. I would like to hear from anyone with a critique of my writing, good or bad. If you do send me a critique, please be specific. I would like to know what you like or dislike about the story. "That was a load of crap" or "best story since 'Gone with the Wind' aren't helpful in helping me decide what to include in my next story.
Location
Inside your head.