Let me be clear, I am always interested in CONSTRUCTIVE criticism of my work... but if you're just going to type "this sucks", save us both some time and write it on a piece of paper, fold it up neatly, and shove it sideways straight up your ass.
Since Literotica has never updated their contact links - practicallly NOBODY uses ICQ anymore and AOL is officially dead - you can KIK me at Maverick7613 as well.
I find it highly entertaining when someone who has never submitted a work here feels the need to comment on an ACTUAL author's work and denigrate the quality of the writing.
I don't tell Tom Brady he throws shitty passes... how about you show us your game before you criticize ours, hmm?
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