Well, I suppose I'm off to a good start, but more comments would be appreciated ;-) I enjoy hearing what you think, and I'm open to critiques as long as they're helpful.
I've been getting some nice feedback: Thanks I really appreciate it--yall keep me writing. No worries, I intend to finish Old Fashioned Love Story, I'm just a super-slow writer....
Note that in Innocent Seduction, I say Kat ran 10 blocks to class? I meant she caught the bus to take her the 6 miles. Also, Kat takes 3-4 classes a day depending on the day and Connor happens to be in two of them--on the particular day Part 1 takes place, Connor is in her first and last class. Sorry I didn't make that clear--thanks to Chuck for bringing that to my attention.
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