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Click here"OH MY GOD IM CUMMING!" I screamed, feeling my orgasm at last smash into me. She kept stroking, even faster, and my cum exploded from me like a fire hose. I felt my cum splatter over my chest, hit my chin, my shoulder; Natalie gasped in surprise at the quantity and force of my ejaculation. She kept rubbing, and I kept cuming. I barely noticed that I was thrashing desperately in my bonds, and only some distant part of me was aware enough to hope I didn't accidently throw her from the bed.
Eventually, the spurting stopped, and I settled back into the bed, twitching occasionally as Natalie slowed her hands, and gradually stopped. My balls felt like deflated beach balls, and my cock had fallen into a coma. My eyes closed, and I felt sleep not far off.
"That was fun," Natalie commented. "Again next weekend?"
I groaned. But I also felt my cock twitch slightly at the thought.
She certainly knows how to torture a helpless sex slave. He didn't have a chance while she had him exactly where she wanted him. It is absolutely delicious to be under a sexy vamp's spell and not be able to do anything to stop her. How delectable is that!
Good premise.
You need an editor. You wrote BARLEY when you meant BARELY.
Teasing not bad, but not great. Each instance/episode didn't contain enough details. and ended to quickly.
While she was sitting on his face, I don't understand why she didn't make him lick her to multiple orgasms. And give him instructions as what to do. And where. And how. Faster/slower/harder/softer/there/suck my clit. Ans all the while playing/jerking his cock ever so slowly.
Four stars.
I hope it was all true and it led to much more. Two of my ex's, Mitzi and Denise started off as Dom and somehow made me more and more sub until I found myself becoming a very willing cuckold. For my own selfish reasons I hope this progresses in that direction. You can also read about them in my stories. I love your writing style and would give it 5 stars!
I really don't know why some people bother to read a story, pass a comment, if they then throw a tantrum & behave like a big girl's blouse. It's only a story for christ's sake. If you think you can do any better, go for it. I somehow don't think you could.
Couldn't have been less clever.
Couldn't have been less interesting.
Couldn't have been worse.
It WAS just terrible, unimaginative drivel.
Really very well told. She was the perfect loving femdom wife. She was playful, strict, and thorough. Knew him well enough to know he could handle what she was doing. The story reflected the love she has for her husband and how much she wants to make him happy.
I've got no problem giving mean, ugly stories a raspberry, but this wasn't one. She sure did jump right in there, and was a little too fond of saying 'slave.' But those are minor personal issues for me. He definitely sought this and never indicated a desire to stop. She teased and delayed, but nothing was degrading and he got a happy ending. One of the most enjoyable femdom stories I've read.
You'd get even better Anonymous criticism if you made the next story about a wife who ties her husband up and has sex with another man. I think there's a crowd of former cuckolds who ejaculate on their keyboards and then write angry things about the author, the wife character, and the husband (if he doesn't destroy and/or divorce her).