- Erotic Poetry
- Black Forest Rhapsody
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Click hereBlack forest rhapsody
All the shades of black, green, blue, and purple
Swirling gently
like a kaleidoscope before my eyes
Can’t close my eyes
Don’t want to lose sight of this black forest rhapsody
Black, green, blue, and purple
And every shade in between
Painted seduction
Against a backdrop of black forest rhapsody
Smooth and seamless tapestry
The threads that bind the universe
Black, green, blue and purple
I’ve never been cradled so gently
Heavy moist air fondling my flesh
each caress from your cool hands
Deliberate and lazy, dancing to the beat
of black forest rhapsody
lullabies
Can’t tell if my eyes are closed or not
Swimming in black forest rhapsody
Black, green, blue, and purple
I would drown in your flesh
And soar the ocean of your soul
Just to feel rooted in black forest rhapsody
Shades of black, green, blue and purple
The womb of surrealism
Body is sinking and my mind has never felt so light
I feel the blades of grass to the clouds
the beating of our hearts to the stars
the heat of our embrace to all that is dead and decaying
Streaks of madness and black forest rhapsody
Black, green, blue and purple
Upon flesh we are eternal
Within chaos we are free
Black, green, blue, and purple
Complicate and uncomplicated me
The delicacy of paradox burns in our being….
Black forest rhapsody….
black, green, blue, and purple….
Coursing through my body, I am riding every wave of frenzied pleasure….
Inhale, Exhale….
Exhale, Inhale…
Black forest rhapsody
All the shades of black, green, blue, and purple….
Liberation is the sweetest confession to slavery….
I am free in all that binds me; I am true in every web of lies….
Cosmos swirl before my eyes…..matter implodes and explodes…..destruction and regeneration pounding through my body….
Black forest rhapsody….
Black, green, blue, and purple….
I am breathless upon the fringe of death and rebirth….
Black forest rhapsody….
Black forest rhapsody….
Every shade of black, green, blue and purple.
- COMMENTS
tazz317over 11 years agofor which you can vision music, TK U MLJ LV NV
jd4georgeover 19 years agoThere's something in this that fascinates me. I like the repetition of "black forest rhapsody", though it might have happened a few too many times.
With that repetition, the repeating color line seemed to become ineffectual to me. As I wondered why, I realized that it felt like you were continuing to tell about the colors, without showing them to me... yet, there are wonderful desrciptions of your discovery of those colors thoughout the poem.
What if you dropped that refrain: "Black, green, blue, and purple And every shade in between", and took us through those colors, one at a time?
I think the balance of the repetition would be more effective, and poem much stronger.
Thanks for writing something that makes me review my own mechanics. (By the way, I love the title).
