by Du Lac
best line, even in context
Whistling faith of an enkindled muse.
worst line, sounds like New Age warrior rant
Warrior and child embodied soul,
I did notice that you use both brigid and briget in the poem. "Fading Briget, ripened ashes, Brigid embodied, three sisters of fire." Are these sisters?
Your Poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey
The Goddess Bride, Briget, Brigid, returns in Spring bowing to the wise crone as she leaves Her time. Lovely, lovely poem. I gave it a 5 even though you misspelled Imbolc. But why so late? Ostara is nearly upon us!
Bright Blessings
Such mystical writings, you have no peer.
Although perhaps there is blue;
But in any case, you two manage to increase my Google time
Most every time I read a blue or du piece.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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