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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Interesting

A very nice examination of vulnerability. Well done.

flyguy

irishcatsmeowirishcatsmeowover 19 years ago
been there...

great job of conveying your state of being. I like that you use the colors of a bruise and how you interwove them in the poem.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The bruise as metaphor for various stages of pain and being.

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