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Our bodies slick with sweat

pressing skin to skin

to be feeling this good

must surely be a sin

After the first half, the rhyme and imagery become less appealing. Loved the first half, though.

~Syn

I don't mind being the 'bad guy' here because I know that in fact -I am not. I looked at the Bio. Like I thought, a young guy - It’s great that you write a poem. My sense, a poem gives you an opportunity to go beyond or underneath the skin. How about emotions AND passion? Would not that be a somewhat richer poem?

Looking forward for your next poem...