All Comments on 'Drawn'

I think this might be your best work I've read yet. Seeing your progress to maturity as a writer has made me proud - and humble. The imagery in this shows a new strength as well as acceptance of our fate, which is to endure. Love Always, carson.

... and somewhat disturbing. As carson said, powerful! ~Imp

I liked this a lot, but can't pinpoint why. It just speaks to me and tells my heart something that my brain can't register. That end that draws near, the uncertainty, the hope for freedom (or at least a little bit of it), it all speaks to me clearly and tells me everything I fear, hope, and yearn for. Please continue to write such profound beauty.

Your poem is mentioned on the New Poems thread. Have a Cool Yule. :)